Ok you know what it is.
About 10 lines, give or take a few, house rules, drop tomorrow when you get time.

Good luck.

thats cool checkin in and droppin
sometime tomorrow..

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You gonna be droppin soon man. I'm waiting on you. Just wanna make sure.

Well. Get at me on aim if you wish. You know. Young 33 Gunna.

aight


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this wannabe thug...steps to the keyboard hooded not fearin no man...
ducking the law...nah.......its just the neighbor hood watch program...
hhmm...need personals...well young what you suggest I should do...
never mind...
just bring your best...and not that kid in the picture with you...
get ya weight up P...to stand a chance you’ll need a few muscles...
flirtin wit death...but must admit you guys do make a cute couple...
this kids a rapper...one of the best...enough jokes now back to reality....
this dudes got me “fucked up”
...even that^ sounds like one of your sexual fantasies...
i’m through wit this fag...shows over..no way the best should lose...
young hasn’t been well rounded...since inside his fathers testicles...

uppin for young to spit his verse
drop whenever P
out...

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For idiots... Stool=Poop, Reither=A surname

Haha. Bye Mynd.

Wack kid dont know it's Gladiator he'll be suprised to see my thumb is up.
I would break down his verse. . . but my first word just about sums it up!
I've been around quite a long time and found that telling the truth helps.
So honestly.... the periods were more interesting than your verse was itself!
Believed he actually could rap well but realized to me, he was a reither.
So he tried out fortune telling. . .

DaKurse2000: Im going to beat you

. . . Looks like he's not good at that either!
Your username brings me to a tough question..were you referring to stool?
Or didnt you realize it was a double negative.. when you said your mind was full!
Knew noone liked him, so he made an alias, (he heard fags come in twos).
But atleast we both agree on one thing. . . no way the best should lose!

So. Can we get some votes on this beeeyattcchhh!

And yea. I fixed my style on that because half the lines went onto the second line.

I had the periods to spaced out.

Good luck.

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this wannabe thug...steps to the keyboard hooded not fearin no man...
ducking the law...nah.......its just the neighbor hood watch program...
meh....didnt really like this....not for the opener...3/10

hhmm...need personals...well young what you suggest I should do...
never mind...
just bring your best...and not that kid in the picture with you...
wording kinda off...but i liked nonetheless...7/10

get ya weight up P...to stand a chance you’ll need a few muscles...
flirtin wit death...but must admit you guys do make a cute couple...
hmm...i didnt really take this as a punch...5/10

this kids a rapper...one of the best...enough jokes now back to reality....
this dudes got me “fucked up”
...even that^ sounds like one of your sexual fantasies...
played concept in this diss..didnt really like.......4/10

i’m through wit this fag...shows over..no way the best should lose...
young hasn’t been well rounded...since inside his fathers testicles...
started off bad...ended bad...not good at all to me....2/10

overall for mynd full...21/50...not too good



Wack kid dont know it's Gladiator he'll be suprised to see my thumb is up.
I would break down his verse. . . but my first word just about sums it up!
this was aight...pretty good opening...7/10

I've been around quite a long time and found that telling the truth helps.
So honestly.... the periods were more interesting than your verse was itself!
hmm...this was meh..not really a punch..half a punch half nonsense...4/10

Believed he actually could rap well but realized to me, he was a reither.
So he tried out fortune telling. . .

DaKurse2000: Im going to beat you

. . . Looks like he's not good at that either!
pretty coo...liked the play off his quote..if true...7/10

Your username brings me to a tough question..were you referring to stool?
Or didnt you realize it was a double negative.. when you said your mind was full!
creative indeed...i'll give it another 7/10

Knew noone liked him, so he made an alias, (he heard fags come in twos).
But atleast we both agree on one thing. . . no way the best should lose!
nope nope nope....u played off his verse..automatic 0/10

Overall Young P...25/50...not too good...but slightly better...winner..no hate

this wannabe thug...steps to the keyboard hooded not fearin no man...
ducking the law...nah.......its just the neighbor hood watch program...
eehh, it was ok
hhmm...need personals...well young what you suggest I should do...
never mind...
just bring your best...and not that kid in the picture with you...
the punch was blah, but that pic is fuckin halarious
get ya weight up P...to stand a chance you’ll need a few muscles...
flirtin wit death...but must admit you guys do make a cute couple...
lol, seen the concept but this was a decent flip
this kids a rapper...one of the best...enough jokes now back to reality....
this dudes got me “fucked up”
...even that^ sounds like one of your sexual fantasies...
eeeh, not feelin it
i’m through wit this fag...shows over..no way the best should lose...
young hasn’t been well rounded...since inside his fathers testicles...
this was cool

This verse was ok. You had a few decent punches


Wack kid dont know it's Gladiator he'll be suprised to see my thumb is up.
I would break down his verse. . . but my first word just about sums it up!
eehh, this was ok
I've been around quite a long time and found that telling the truth helps.
So honestly.... the periods were more interesting than your verse was itself!
lol, funny line, but feeding is bad
Believed he actually could rap well but realized to me, he was a reither.
So he tried out fortune telling. . .

DaKurse2000: Im going to beat you

. . . Looks like he's not good at that either!
this was ok
Your username brings me to a tough question..were you referring to stool?
Or didnt you realize it was a double negative.. when you said your mind was full!
ok...
Knew noone liked him, so he made an alias, (he heard fags come in twos).
But atleast we both agree on one thing. . . no way the best should lose!
a little more feeding here

This one had a few decent punches too, but the feeding hurt you

This was a very close battle Punch-wise, but Mynd gets my verse because of more creativity on his part, and young feed off of mynd on 2 of his punches.

Vote: Mynd Full

Please return the favore and vot on my battle with GaZeebo

-W1

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Dick sucker^.

Ahh can we get fair votes.

Not "Hey go vote for me and I'll vote for you homie!"

this wannabe thug...steps to the keyboard hooded not fearin no man...
ducking the law...nah.......its just the neighbor hood watch program...
ok not rly feeling this
hhmm...need personals...well young what you suggest I should do...
never mind...
just bring your best...and not that kid in the picture with you...
[/b]wak flow......ruind the punch[/b]
get ya weight up P...to stand a chance you’ll need a few muscles...
flirtin wit death...but must admit you guys do make a cute couple...
nice punch flow was coo
this kids a rapper...one of the best...enough jokes now back to reality....
this dudes got me “fucked up”
...even that^ sounds like one of your sexual fantasies...
didnt like this bit played
i’m through wit this fag...shows over..no way the best should lose...
young hasn’t been well rounded...since inside his fathers testicles...
nice closer man


Wack kid dont know it's Gladiator he'll be suprised to see my thumb is up.
I would break down his verse. . . but my first word just about sums it up!
nice punch wasnt feeling the first line tho
I've been around quite a long time and found that telling the truth helps.
So honestly.... the periods were more interesting than your verse was itself!
bit weak here
Believed he actually could rap well but realized to me, he was a reither.
So he tried out fortune telling. . .

DaKurse2000: Im going to beat you

. . . Looks like he's not good at that either!
nice set up.....good
Your username brings me to a tough question..were you referring to stool?
Or didnt you realize it was a double negative.. when you said your mind was full!
uuuummmmmm...ah i got it
Knew noone liked him, so he made an alias, (he heard fags come in twos).
But atleast we both agree on one thing. . . no way the best should lose!
woot woot...........nice closer again flow was ite


overall.................p got this nice flow with harder consistent punches.........mynd got personals but the pic was ver played by the end..............nice battle tho...


..............N P MAN...WE WILL BATTLE NEXT WEEK FORSHIZLE............PZ

True. And seriously K, heres a tip. Unless you got something really good to say about one of my pics, I suggest not using it since it's so overplayed.

Just some advice.

I gotta go with Mynd Full on this one. His personals were very witty.

hhmm...need personals...well young what you suggest I should do...
just bring your best...and not that kid in the picture with you...
get ya weight up P...to stand a chance you’ll need a few muscles...
flirtin wit death...but must admit you guys do make a cute couple...
^These personals regarding the picture killed it, they both actually made me laugh. Mynd's verse was good overall, but your finisher wasn't that great, work on that some more.

Young P:
Nothing from your verse really stood out. The, "my first word sums it up" is witty... but played. Only punch I liked was the...
Believed he actually could rap well but realized to me, he was a reither.
So he tried out fortune telling. . .

DaKurse2000: Im going to beat you

. . . Looks like he's not good at that either!

Your finisher was decent... but you fed off his verse a bit and that just cemented my opinion that Mynd Full is the winner.

Don't sway votes either. Like you did after W1CKED's vote.

Vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108919

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thanks for the vote peeps
but we need a few more votes
uppers..

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