10 lines
your dopeness is first
20 minutes each
g'luck

check check check....... Whats a battle again?....

checkin in, checkin in twice...gunna find out whos spits so nice

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

LOL^ your my new favorite person. Drop dope kid...

Ima knock your dick so far in u can call it a clit/
so sit, and realize this new presentation I spit/

I may be new to rappin and rhymes, but crack open the Times/
and notice ".snap.", front page, dazzlin minds!/

Lyric's shit is over-played, like rainbow hair-do's/
the only time you 'get involved' is watching Blues Clues!/

Just admit that your rappin intelligence is oh so artificial/
This niggah blows more men then a referee blows his whistle!/

Its time ta delete this weak elite piece of meat/
superglue his seat and beat this meak lyric~al creat(ure)/


~DoNe~

g/l lyric, 20 min..pe@ce

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

k sorry I was out, try to do this asap......................

um, ok...

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

Told ya neck I was battlin ya and it was like 'snap!'
You a fake emcee made up of whackness and crap
Your call stated that you'd waste any who replied
Your anutha kid from Cali, but I doubt your rep West Side
Like a drive-by with spit balls, your rap brings no force
You a wannbe textee, from writin ya voice gets hoarse
My punches all connect, while you gave a decent try
But you must be in the Airforce son, ya punches did fly-bys
Nothin you threw hit and ya verse is completly played
The best punch ya ever threw was..uh...your..um.gay

hey man close battle

lyric- ya shit was good.. nice structure and flow punches were good also
i think you had him...

snap- elevate... nice stuff for a beginer but i dont know the second to
last bar was pretty damned played explain that blues clues line too i
dont even get it

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close battle both didn't come much with many hard hard punches.....lyric had two Ok ones and thats enough to beat snap inthis because he was really played his opener is so old.....elevate son...keep going....lyric your opener was ...eheh funny but kinda whak no hate dog ...keep up the shit both of you peace out.....

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uppin this for da first time. Pleased drop a honest vote and a link. Thanks

agiht........... my eyes... i think lric took it...

snap tried to rhyme with that 3 rhyme scheme an it didn't really work........ a basic verse with flow an punches wins this one........

vote-lyric.........

you guys gotta return the favor............. vote honest.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...99&page=1&pp=15

^^^hit it up........peace

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Damn… some ‘common sense’ must not be so common-to-u…
Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~

uppin this #2. Come on guys, lets see ya honest votes. Dun sleep

uppin this #3. Hit this up please with some honest votes