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LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1 | 0 | 0% | |
Saltshaka | 4 | 100.00% | |
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01-27-04, 08:15 PM | #1 |
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Saltshaka vs. LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1
IP: 2FA3 1696
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no crew hate dick votes must check in vote 30 min. afta check in Blind spit..so no feedin...which u shouldn't if ya post within tha time limit.. good luck this is my check in..........afta u check we'll both write our verse |
01-27-04, 08:16 PM | #2 | |
Flyweight
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IP: D5EA 4189
aight checkity check checkin in at this cheap ass holidae inn......good luck dawg wun
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01-27-04, 08:29 PM | #3 |
New to RB
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IP: 2FA3 1696
U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane//
You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane// Ya lyrics are weak like a kid in kindergardens math// Even if u wuz beserk u still wouldn't have a killer wrath// Kid might as well say he spittin bones cuz I ate tha meat off his verse// I don't stop when ya dead, I make sure they wreck ya hurse// Erybody gonna diss ya verse like u wuz in American Idol// Betta yet betta make me ya idol, cuz afta dis battle u really gonna be IDLE// Homie must think he's ill cuz in his sig, he's intoxic-ated// Look on tha bright side, ya 0-3, so no way u over-rated// aight....letz do this |
01-27-04, 08:32 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP: D5EA 4189
5 POSTS...HAHA
DoGg they created the death poll becuz of me/ U just gonna b anotha victim i guarantee/ Cuz a cat like you wont even break skin!/ Sure ull get a hit but ur skills empty like a violin/ Simply anotha wannabe cock suckin pranksta/ Baggy clothes, Straight brimmed hat, the whole nine...face it ull neva be gangsta/ The way u try to act tough but inside ur as soft as fur/ But i dunt think ull eva get the picture....u jus keep wishin u were/ But its ur first battle so jus keep tryin/ Cuz its only losses ull be indentifyin/ Aight yo u just a regular newbie that i dont have to use energy on/ Let it be heard this is true...a gospel according to john/ |
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01-27-04, 09:10 PM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: D5EA 4189
uppin #1.........lets get sum votes......drop a link and ill return the favor.............please vote...............1.........
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01-27-04, 09:19 PM | #6 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
I was feelin Salts verse til the American Idol line, shit kid no good. Lyrically came weaker than normal, he didn't throw that many punches in this battle. Salt came good for a newb, I think Lyrically underestimated hime, salt had a few ok punches and metas. Vote-Salt
Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084 |
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01-27-04, 09:47 PM | #7 | |
Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: B3D4 AD44
Salt[/B}
U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane// You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane// [B]Blah punch... be more direct and complex Ya lyrics are weak like a kid in kindergardens math// Even if u wuz beserk u still wouldn't have a killer wrath// So-So... Kid might as well say he spittin bones cuz I ate tha meat off his verse// I don't stop when ya dead, I make sure they wreck ya hurse// Meh.. Erybody gonna diss ya verse like u wuz in American Idol// Betta yet betta make me ya idol, cuz afta dis battle u really gonna be IDLE// u used idle/idol 3 times[/B} Homie must think he's ill cuz in his sig, he's intoxic-ated// Look on tha bright side, ya 0-3, so no way u over-rated// [B]I could be 0-3....dont mean im bad, i have an alias that i started off on as 0-3 LLS DoGg they created the death poll becuz of me/ U just gonna b anotha victim i guarantee/ Not a strong opening Cuz a cat like you wont even break skin!/ Sure ull get a hit but ur skills empty like a violin/ ok punch Simply anotha wannabe cock suckin pranksta/ Baggy clothes, Straight brimmed hat, the whole nine...face it ull neva be gangsta/ Decent hit[/B} The way u try to act tough but inside ur as soft as fur/ But i dunt think ull eva get the picture....u jus keep wishin u were/ [B]so-so... not the greatest But its ur first battle so jus keep tryin/ Cuz its only losses ull be indentifyin/ Blah... Aight yo u just a regular newbie that i dont have to use energy on/ Let it be heard this is true...a gospel according to john/ No punch...weak closer Overall - Salt took this battle even though both verses werent the greatest
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01-27-04, 09:47 PM | #8 | |
Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: B3D4 AD44
Salt[/B}
U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane// You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane// [B]Blah punch... be more direct and complex Ya lyrics are weak like a kid in kindergardens math// Even if u wuz beserk u still wouldn't have a killer wrath// So-So... Kid might as well say he spittin bones cuz I ate tha meat off his verse// I don't stop when ya dead, I make sure they wreck ya hurse// Meh.. Erybody gonna diss ya verse like u wuz in American Idol// Betta yet betta make me ya idol, cuz afta dis battle u really gonna be IDLE// u used idle/idol 3 times[/B} Homie must think he's ill cuz in his sig, he's intoxic-ated// Look on tha bright side, ya 0-3, so no way u over-rated// [B]I could be 0-3....dont mean im bad, i have an alias that i started off on as 0-3 LLS DoGg they created the death poll becuz of me/ U just gonna b anotha victim i guarantee/ Not a strong opening Cuz a cat like you wont even break skin!/ Sure ull get a hit but ur skills empty like a violin/ ok punch Simply anotha wannabe cock suckin pranksta/ Baggy clothes, Straight brimmed hat, the whole nine...face it ull neva be gangsta/ Decent hit[/B} The way u try to act tough but inside ur as soft as fur/ But i dunt think ull eva get the picture....u jus keep wishin u were/ [B]so-so... not the greatest But its ur first battle so jus keep tryin/ Cuz its only losses ull be indentifyin/ Blah... Aight yo u just a regular newbie that i dont have to use energy on/ Let it be heard this is true...a gospel according to john/ No punch...weak closer Overall - Salt took this battle even though both verses werent the greatest
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01-27-04, 11:13 PM | #9 |
New to RB
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IP: 2FA3 1696
Uppin ma 1st time b4 i go to bed
peace........... |
01-28-04, 10:50 AM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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IP: D5EA 4189
uppin............................................. .....number 2................................................. ..
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01-28-04, 07:16 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: D5EA 4189
uppin for the 3rd time come on dont sleep on this just vote.............................................. ..
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01-28-04, 10:13 PM | #12 |
New to RB
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IP: 2FA3 1696
uppin ma 2nd time...letz get sum votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
and rememba to poll vote... :P |
01-29-04, 12:29 AM | #13 |
Banned
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IP: 02C8 475B
salt took this shit...even though he a newb he came wit it...wit some okay punches and some okay wordplay...
insane1 was a lil wack he usually doin good but this battle he flopped vote-salt |
01-29-04, 12:30 AM | #14 |
Banned
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IP: 02C8 475B
salt took this shit...even though he a newb he came wit it...wit some okay punches and some okay wordplay...
insane1 was a lil wack he usually doin good but this battle he flopped vote-salt salt your rite mi shit was tite...but you gotta get enough posts tah vote..den hit me up we battle |
01-29-04, 12:57 AM | #15 | |
Light Weight
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IP: D79E B542
I enjoyed watching a newb batle a flyweight and it was good to a certain climax.
Salt shaka had a killer opener and straight closer, punches alright, but what I like about dis kid is dat he has potential and da creativeness on his punchlines like dis below. elevate your structure and flow and dats what you need because your a witty one already. U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane// You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane// as for LyricallyInsane1 you didn't have a good start which made me say what da hell and da punches weren't hitting and didn't connect at all most of da times. It looked like you underestimated your opponent and took him waaaaay too lightly. Improve your wordplay, punches, and metaphors and you'll be straight jus keep elevating. !!!GOOD BATTLE BOTH OF YOU!!! vote= SaltShaka ( reasons are explained above) vote on ma battle (AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin) below is da link. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
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