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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
d.liver.e | 5 | 83.33% | |
lyrical-murder | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-27-04, 01:44 PM | #16 |
Flyweight
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IP: 6DCE 207A
uppin this shit... plz drop a vote 'n link with your battlez or whatever.. just vote already and get this shit over with!
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01-28-04, 08:02 AM | #17 |
Flyweight
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IP: 2B5C 63D0
last up... drop some fucking votez....................
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01-28-04, 08:11 AM | #18 | |
Light Weight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
d.liver nice verse, good flow and punches
lm ur verse was good 2, it was a close battle but im gonna have to go with d.live vote--d.liver vs outcome (tourney battle) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109556 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token |
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01-28-04, 09:31 AM | #19 |
Flyweight
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IP: 2B5C 63D0
thxz 4 votin but plz hit it up on the poll... thxz...... more votez plz...
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01-28-04, 02:13 PM | #20 |
Flyweight
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IP: 3429 C55E
uppin........leave links with your battlez..........
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01-30-04, 03:43 AM | #21 |
Flyweight
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IP: CF31 686A
plz drop some votez so we can close thiz shit................
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01-30-04, 11:10 AM | #22 |
Flyweight
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IP: 96EE 0D73
uppin............................................. .
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01-30-04, 02:49 PM | #23 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
Shit I wrote a novel and the shit got erased. Anyway
Lyrical- Your lines were a bit too stretched and that messed the floe up. You came too basic, and with too much filler. Try and be more creative with your punches, personals, and metas. Also try not to be repetative in ya words, ya used 'slugs' twice and it still sounded bad even if was only twice. Keep elevatin girl, ya get there soon. Check out Whackness Emergency Center for good battle tips and also check some battles in LLL. D.liver.E- Good verse...kinda basic but ya did throw some good punches. Get rid of the / shit after your bars. Some good metas too, try and be more creative with ya punches, personals, and metas..some were close to bein over played. Also Stay away from the sex/gay shit as that is played to all hell. Vote-D.liver.E For the love of god please drop an honest vote here, bitch has been open forever!!!! thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513 |
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01-30-04, 02:56 PM | #24 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
FUCK THIS IS THE THIRD TIME IM WRITIN THIS SHIT. IF IT DELETES AGAIN SORRY GUYS, BUT NO VOTE!!!!!!!!!!
Ahh ok. Lyrical- Your lines were a bit too stretched and that effected your flow. Also try and use less filler. You said 'slugs' twice which made ya verse sound very repetative even if it was only twice. Check out Whcakness Emergency Center for good battle tips. Also check out battles in LLL for structure tips and to see dope MCs. Your punches were sort of weak and basic. Try and be creative with yourt punches/personals/metas. Keep at it girl, you'll fo fine. D.liver.E- You had a good flow and structure, jus take the / out after your bars. They unnecessary. had some good punches and metas, but also you cuold be a liitle more creative. Check out WEC and some elite battles for tips. You have the right idea tho. Please drop a vote/opinion here guys. Gettin mad slept on! I took the time (3 times) for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110540 |
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01-31-04, 07:24 AM | #25 | |
New to RB
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IP: 6220 6988
~ Uppin For Tha Last Time I hope, get some votes.............. Peace ~
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01-31-04, 12:43 PM | #26 |
Flyweight
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IP: AA01 ED59
uppin... drop some votez, leave linkz or whatever, I wanna close thiz, itz been open for like forever...
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01-31-04, 01:12 PM | #27 | |
Flyweight
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IP: C305 0C9D
lyrical you got skills and nice punches. you tried the eminem thang out ya self on blast to take some of his weapons. much love.
the only thing though he didn't use none of them and didn't have ta. he got a nice flow and his punches were solid. personals weren;t that good but he gets the node casue of clartiy and flow. vote on my battles saltshaka vs me puertoricanelly vs me drinc against me show luv |
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02-01-04, 03:06 AM | #28 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8259 BC55
what the fuck is he talkin' about? Just another Eminem-dickrider I guess... Fuck off... Uppin' 4 some votez that make sense... and make clear who he/she is votin' on...
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02-03-04, 02:48 PM | #29 |
Flyweight
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IP: 833B F2B7
uppin......................thiz shitz been open for way 2 long
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02-04-04, 03:31 PM | #30 |
Flyweight
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IP: 833B F2B7
uppin............................................. .
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