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Old 02-01-04, 12:16 AM   #1
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Mental apocalypse supreed's the inner thoughts
inbreeds with no perogatives..& sentimental scrots(scriptures)
Words that cant be re-written, bitten nor recycled..
because there not on the paper to begin with
Vocabulary and structure deminish, nothing to build
or finish... a stone wall caves ur inner brain
Nothing is flowing, like a winter-drain
been threw pain.. but nothing like this before
Insane inter-being, cant start the outer-seeing
thoughts galore', but nothing matching.. nothing more
The futile lock on the door, ur neceulus decepts ur core
neglects ur wantin of succes.. nothing matches the bore
Cant write nor spit.. no fight left, & nothing to begin-with
but just at that instant.. a flood apears
And the flower bud clears.. and the root nears'
and it sprouts, nothing clogging ur inner-thoughts
Just when you thought it was over...finished
just that instant...a new life to begin with
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Old 02-01-04, 12:25 AM   #2
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blah I've been doin audio latly, and text seems farfetched..
but peep this shyt
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Old 02-01-04, 01:12 AM   #3
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Old 02-01-04, 01:14 AM   #4
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Tight Theme, vocabulary was good, nice complexity too it.. Creative shit. It was an hot flow, multis were nice, nothin' really to comment about, I liked how you didn't make it too long,too. Keep it up.
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Old 02-01-04, 11:28 AM   #5
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yoo thanks...
Like I said i've been doin audio alot latly, but still its dope =)
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Old 02-01-04, 12:32 PM   #6
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yo i think it was hot
alot of webster in there and that helps, but as long as you know what the words mean
"i drink listerine, brush my teeth with amphetamines
so i ca keep it fresh and say dop thngs in between"
ha ha ha ha .......yo thats aggy
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Old 02-01-04, 05:33 PM   #7
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^rofl ur an idiot
Im not gonna even say anything
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Old 02-01-04, 05:42 PM   #8
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Nice Drop Viscosity, Even When You're on The Audio Tip You Can Pull A Nice Open Mic Out Ya Ass LoL. . Complexity Was Ill, As Was THe Content, Vocab Was Dope, That Kid Up There Obviously Doesn't Know What The Words Mean, So He's Gonna Question Whether You Do Or Not, Typical Dumbass. . Flow Was On-Point N Overall I Was Feelin This, Keep Droppin. Pz.

but just at that instant.. a flood apears
And the flower bud clears.. and the root nears'
and it sprouts, nothing clogging ur inner-thoughts
Just when you thought it was over...finished
just that instant...a new life to begin with
^ ^ Woo, Ill Finish. . Feelin' It.

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