aright dawg it just seemed kind of sketchy- anyway uppin

Ok Yomama For Real Why You Gotta Think Dat Cuz You Losin ??? Seriously Man I Dont Cheat Talk hat Ya Know !!

Also I Had 2 More Votes Who Deleted It ?

Momma

Fatal thinks he's tha man but we know its pretend
only thing fatal's got is AIDS from his boyfriend
1st line was meh and 2nd was ok
well either him or his grandpa, it might depend
sorry faggot, but this is your end
Played... basic wack punch
Fatal's lyrics are whack
he wasn't prepared for my attack
Basic wack punch
well what do you expect, im YOMAMA and ive found out-
your a hypocritical bitch without a doubt
Basic again..need complexity kiddo
yo name dont match yo game
yo lyricals are lame and youve got bad aim
Really? sure u aint talkin bout yaself?
your a fag and youve probably got long hair
your avatar matches you, you guys are a pair
Tried for a personal but like pitching a perfect game it was a no hitter
scum like you beatin me is rare,
right now yo probably whinning- "damn it's not fair!"
Better then your rest...not by much
if you still think you got fatal lyrics then your smokin too much shit
you gotta be embarassed, do yo self a favor and quit
Played... even with that it was ya best line


Fatal

I AInt Embarassed Cuz Nicca Am Yo Nightmare\\
Beatin Me Is Like Gettin A Answer Right In Who Wanna Be A Millionaire\\
wack opening cuz ya punch was false... people get answers right there
Take Yo Chance Like In a Quick Game Of Solitare\\
I Leave You In ~despair~ you the one shoutin its ~unfair~ And Yomama Be ~aware~
cuz we all know u and Michael Jackson Got An Affair\\
Really streatched 2nd line...lay off the multis and weak punch
He Lookin Amazed At meh With His Eye Popped ~Out~\\
Mah Dick In His MOMMA's Mouth And He Bout 2 ~SHOUT~\\
Ummm.... not a good punch at all
I Lyrically Buried Him Sacredly The Cops Gave Out On His ~CASE~\\
I Left Him With No ~TRACE~ Spittin Faster Then A Live POLICE ~CHASE~\\
this line was ok
Am A Experienced Genius With Mah ~Curriculums~\\
THis Foo Is ~DUMB~ Laughin While I Punch His ~Diverticulum~ He Has A Finger But He Use His Finger Holin ~THUMB~\\
2nd line was again streatched like the other one, cut em down and lay off he multis
Im More Then A MasterMind Im a~GENIOUS~\\
His Girl Was Confused askin "Is Your Pinky Your ~PENIUS~ ?"
Dumb and wack
Fuck The Ankles, I'll Have Ya Whole Posture-Broke/
Ya Ego So Big That When U Flow Its A Cause-To-Choke/
Not that good
Krossova Ya Lines Wit Confidence As I Con-Yours/
Slappin Ya In The Face Multiple Times,Theres Your Encore
ok ending


Overall - you both need to take a trip to Wackness Emergancy Center, but Fatal took this even with his wake dumb punches becuase he actually tried to throw some and they were more complex then YOMOMMA's, even though there wasnt much complexity in eithers verse.

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My vote goes to fatal.....werent really any punches that stood out but all in all fatal took it barely....both were aight.....peace........

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Flow: Fatal
WordPlay: Fatal
Multis: Fatal
opener: Yo Momma
Closer Fatal
Metas: Tie
Final Vote: Fatal
peace.

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Alright,4-0 Still Uppin For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin.............................................

When Does This Battle Vs Me And Yo Mama End ??? its already been 2 days

My honest vote goes to fatal but both of u need to elevate....ur structure was everywhere.....fatal took dis battle in puches cuz his were alot better and in multis he had atleast 2 in everyline so dats y he gets mah vote..
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Ok 3-0 Kep Votin Plz !!!!!!!!!! Still Uppin !!!!!!!!!!

PLease Vote Guyz Its 3-0 Me Uppin For Votes Still Tho

When Does This Poll Close ????????//

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I wasn't feelin' this battle all too much, I believe both of you need to elvate, but to give my vote off, I'll give i to Fatal Lyrikzz, his flow came better, had better punches, YOMAMA, was too basic.. Keep elevatn..

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Alright 3-0 Keep Votin On Poll THanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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