My bars were strechted because I use big words. Three of my words would make one of his lines "contenders gathered together". Peoples starting to give me a little respect tho. Thats all I want anyway, my skill will grow. Ive only been here for about a month. Thanks for voting

Wise's Verse,
..Aight yo Telekinetic..
I make you extinct..kinda like flags that were Confederit
Jacked ya MC(mastercard)..basically I'm taking ya credit
Not That Good
..Introduced you to death..you met it.. and shook hands
You a Herb..& my intentions to roast you..like cook plans
Pretty Good Wordplay

T..my winds enter ya ear..so my spits just blow ya mind
U ain't Telekinetic..I'll silence ya brain..Tele's justa mime
Pretty Nice

Non-intelligent..
MC can't compare with smarts, cuz u'll never be sqaured
Even with gentle hands I handle u..& still you get teared
Not Good At ALL

..Acting hard..trying to discuss this..but you can't kill me
.Charged with wack..even poetic justice found you guilty
Thats More Like It

Can't touch mine..squeezed my fucking lines..
.....................................And still couldn't bust rhymes
Ain't that funny..Koed ya ass..
........................without using a muthafucking punchline
Nice Flow And nice bar


T's Verse,
Wisdom has never graced your presence or enlightened wise ways
This guys claims he's hit wits end, but in what..............an Escalade?
Wack

No way this guys style is first-class damn you aint even good quality
If all the first-rate contenders gathered together you'd sit alone solemnly
Nice DiSs/Lines

I stay bombin he, or him whatever you want to call it "a crock of shit"
Stir your best rhymes that you got in a pot... and that's what you'll get
It Was Decent

Just quit a couple years an acquire some skill not more dope on the streets
I manipulate the ABC's to murder emcees with much ease now rest in peace
Nice Wordplay

You speak about wisdom under ya name but ya ignorant the equal of the rest
If wack was a crime confess there'd be a sequel to........ "you are under arrest"
Nice

Without a gun an a vest I slaughter an kill its time for you to father your will
Cause while I assassinate the beat.........you got nothin more than time to kill
Prolly Yo Best

Vote: Telekinetic
Telekentic You Had Better Punches,Ok Multis Wordplay And Punchlines....



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I use big words too...
Like "tha, ya, a, be"..lol




^way to admit you recylced that line
Explains tha no personal
lol.....

Damn A good battle indeed.
Punches- Both had some humerous hard hittin punches, But Tele Jus brought more to the table, Came harder..the crock of shit line and the escalade line stuck out the most...
Personals- Both had some descent personals, I think wise put more creativity in to his personals,Intraduced u to death shit was kinda played but at the same time it was nice...wise def. got personals
Flow- Both had ight flows, wise kinda fucked his up at the end of his shit..so that gave tele the upper hand and made his flow better....
Structure-Both had ok structures, Both sqaubled at the end of there shit...tie
wordplay- Tele Used more basic words, kinda played,wise put more creativity into his shit, ok use of meta's.....Meek decsion but I'm gonna have to say wise got this

Wow this battle was so close its not even funny...But i think Tele Just brought more humerous shit to the table, though some of it was played it still hit harder then wise's shit, Wise had some good punches but some were worded uncorrectly,couldve been worded better....I'm gonna have to go w/ tele just becuase his punches were much more humerous and he had more of a solid flow...

V/ Telekinetic

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I was talking about how played your last line was.
I used a version of it a few weeks ago.

Originality - Both
Punches - Wise.. felt Tele had too much in one line so kinda lost its force
Personals - Both.. not as many as expected tho
Flow - Wise.. Tele was vergin on stretched.. easier to follow Wise
Structure - Wise.. always like it
Opener - Tele.. preferred it
Closer - Tele.. witty.. dope.. clever.. etc

VoTe = Wise Ways

Tele opened an closed nice but i couldnt really catch on to a flow cos the lines were kinda stretched.. right idea but too many words.. props tho.. Wise was consistant an the structure made for a smooth flow.. well done both.. nice battle.

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