10-12 lines
W/e the rules are
Lets make this good
drop in 30

checkin in and droppin


aight yo,

UR like Murder Inc Goin' for Broke... and you must be good at it 'Vet'
cuz when I estimate ya Rap Value... you ain't worth a Ja-Cent
bet U get Kicked out of Lethal Lyricists when I'm done... Oh Well
all you have to do is Battle me 3 Times... and I'll have U reppin LLL
you probably pre-wrote all of your weak Punches... fuck it Whatever
cuz when it comes to Ridin dick... is the only time You 'R' Better
saw ya Post & Cha-Ching.... just waitin for my Win to Register
like people with Money... you better off Not Showin ya Signature
Here's a hint... Construction ain't why you know What 'Tools' Are
cuz I whoop that ass everytime bitch... w/e the rules are


blah keyed good luck

ugh...you get a key

Spitten lead at Spit, but what did you expect?
I suggest u sharpen up, before I break ur pencil neck
I keep it real, speaking the truth
Call me crip, the way I C walks on duke
Uh oh, he called me newbie, now ur gettin placement
You can spit 100 bars, & still not come close to A-Jacent
Feelin this? I'm puttin death to RB's angel
Uppercutted ur chin, & got lynched in ya own halo
Fuck it, Spit gettin roast up
Cuz ur shits the ugliest since Mugsey bogues learned to post up

votes will be needed if this battle shall be done...

Jacent - started weak.. first half was too basic an concepts were played.. flow was still there but didnt pack a punch.. picked up with the last two bars.. nice 'halo' line an finisher was pretty ill.. nice meta.

Spit - certainly not ur best.. but good enuff.. consistant punches thru out an the flow worked well.. 2nd bar was dope an certainly witty.. but it needed to be cos ur opener was real weak.. but u did enuff to edge this wiv the rest of ur verse.

VoTe = Spit

Props to both.. now vote on this plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

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uppin2................................vote vote vote yall

jacent came pretty decent..his verse overall wasn't that strong but the halo line and the pencil line were both pretty dope...had some creative shit and decent flow but not really any personals and it just wasn't enough

spit-you dropped pretty decent, looks like you didn't try very hard but you had the more consistent punches and creative wordplay on this one. verse wasn't spitacular but it was pretty good throughout

v/spit

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Good battle guys alot of hard punches and nice metaphors......Jacent had some nice lines....I especially liked the penical neck line....although it has been so as much as i like it gotta take that into consideration.....Originatlity lacked in your verse jacent but you did come hard.....Your worst line....watch me C walk on Duke.......didn't like it....SPit you came hard as usual Good Punches....nice wordplay it had a real nice flow to rhyme scheme was on point and all that good stuff....The punch of yours i didn't like was the R one.....ITs just too...like...you could use anyword ...you know?...its whatever though Spit took this one in my opinion......love to you both ....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111620...
^plz hit that its a good topical mad slept on...........

Uppin4............................................ ...........

5th Uppin...........................................

Vote Spitacular.
Better Flow
Better Punch Lines
Better Vocab
Better Structure
Jacent Had some good lines too but his punches weren't hard...Keep Elevatin

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress

UR like Murder Inc Goin' for Broke... and you must be good at it 'Vet'
cuz when I estimate ya Rap Value... you ain't worth a Ja-Cent
nope...seen it to many times...3/10
bet U get Kicked out of Lethal Lyricists when I'm done... Oh Well
all you have to do is Battle me 3 Times... and I'll have U reppin LLL
loser-loser-loser?....didnt really hit...3/10
you probably pre-wrote all of your weak Punches... fuck it Whatever
cuz when it comes to Ridin dick... is the only time You 'R' Better
sorta liked this one..coulda came harder...6/10
saw ya Post & Cha-Ching.... just waitin for my Win to Register
like people with Money... you better off Not Showin ya Signature
best line i think...8/10
Here's a hint... Construction ain't why you know What 'Tools' Are
cuz I whoop that ass everytime bitch... w/e the rules are
ok closer...didnt really feel it 6/10

spit- 26/50

Spitten lead at Spit, but what did you expect?
I suggest u sharpen up, before I break ur pencil neck
nice concept..seen several plays at it...7/10
I keep it real, speaking the truth
Call me crip, the way I C walks on duke
nope..shoulda been better..3/10
Uh oh, he called me newbie, now ur gettin placement
You can spit 100 bars, & still not come close to A-Jacent
nice..took ur nameflip concept and made it into a punch..7/10
Feelin this? I'm puttin death to RB's angel
Uppercutted ur chin, & got lynched in ya own halo
lol cool thought..think about it.. 5/10
Fuck it, Spit gettin roast up
Cuz ur shits the ugliest since Mugsey bogues learned to post up
damn..true....he is ugly as fuck..aight closer..6/10

Jacent-28/50

both shoulda came harder..still since spit had more played lines then jacent i'd have to give this battle to j..propz to both

v/jacent

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