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02-03-04, 11:18 AM
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Liked this piece... took me a while to read so that a could soak it up, so to speak... liked your multi's... they were very good... You have a nice style... can easily portray the image that you want into people's minds... that is a talent that is very useful... A liked the whole concept of this drop... Sort of a battle between dream and reality... liked that idea... Similar to you piece about Commercial Rap Vs Something else Rap... escapes my memory at the moment... Overall this piece was an excellent read... enjoyed it... keep up the imagery... excellent... pz Hit up the open mic in my sig... thanks |
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02-03-04, 12:29 PM
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02-03-04, 02:41 PM
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why is this getting slept on...Hmmm....
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02-03-04, 03:10 PM
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well i loved the vocab and wordplay, i though the topic was original but hard to catch on to because of the title and structure, other wise nice peice, didnt have a booming ending but it was worth the time to read
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02-03-04, 03:49 PM
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^..thanks topic..^^
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02-03-04, 04:15 PM
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Longest piece I read on Open Mic, and one of the many great ones as well. Very Original, had a good flow to it, otherwise I wouldn't of read the whole thing.. Nice shit...
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02-03-04, 05:57 PM
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02-03-04, 06:09 PM
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Penskills i may be new but please take my feedback just as seriously as anyone elses, I thought this was very ill. Flow was perfect as far as I could tell, i never choked when i was spittin it out loud.. Not only were the multis placed well but your mature vocab would make it difficult for most mc's to find that many words to rhyme, nicely done there...the concept was a little freaky but that makes it all the better, and i always love the multiple viewpoints spits they are so fuckin cool. Bloodthirsty imagery was well done..overall 9/10 please keep it up cos I love your shit!!
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02-03-04, 09:03 PM
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^thanks dude~~~~
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02-04-04, 10:06 PM
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Thanks for the feed on my piece...i read this the other day...had a great style to it..i enjoy how you put two significant aspevts in your pieces day and night...
A lot of quotables in this...I persoanlly would quote the hole opening verse...it was really capturing good structure and flow...very well done emotionsly and imagery wise keep up the good work peace an ya you ever wonna do a collab...hit me up
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02-05-04, 07:40 AM
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Good piece Penskills. Once again you make a good Open Mic
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02-05-04, 08:49 AM
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^Hmmm~~~gay reply...don't reply if you gonna leave some shit like that~~~
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02-05-04, 10:24 AM
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aite, this was very good
it had a ice flow, use of wordz was clever structer was kept toegether, and it was consistant all the way through o on the reply u gave on my batte, respect but, i think u need to listen to the beat that i put it 2. "cum oneverybody" by eminem i have it on soundclick... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mcrussie.htm
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02-08-04, 12:56 AM
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I guess from day one I should've looked up to penskillz,
cauz he spits so hot it's blazin make a nigga Ill! lol no seriously tho this piece wus another ill one not realy in the rap style probly couldve went into the poetic forum? but fuck that still another good drop by penskillz waitin to see more form you... hit up my OpenMics especially Satan's Contract
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