How do I begin.........You dont beat anyone viewed as ill
Look at your win list, score is, herbs - 15, dope Mc's - nil
^bahahh so true so true nice personal......
I got a line to fill...blah blah blah blah...blah blah blah
^^^Thats pointless, but still spittin better than you are
^meh this has really been done ......you know....
Your lines aint up to par, just like a fake Tiger Woods
Your lines are average, mediocre, not even rated good
^ this was an Ok punch come harder make it sting a bit more....
And you should give up this rap, do it now, immediatly
Coz I Pm'd you, and you made excuses not to battle me
^bahahahh i bet he did........
And rb knows you crumble against any half good vet
We pack you up, put you in a cage, use you as a pet
^ehehe OH my goodness good punch.........
But dont let this make you think you'll never be dope
Stay dreamin.....just keep tellin yourself you got hope
^what ...no this was weak dog........
Your a joke, a pussy, a cissy, a faggott, a bitch, a fart
And you know that your wack, deep down in your heart
^damn nice name calling the first line......
You just play the part of a dope MC....really you a ho
Like in the movies, when a gangsta's really Al Pacino
^nice nice....godo punch way to finish strong.....



Lm it should be obvious to you that your the wackest BITCH IN TOWN
cuz all you do is take DICKS IN POUNDS
^this is dumb seriously how long have u been here now andu still use sex lines..
the image in your avatar sums up your battles perfectly.. their always WRITTEN DOWN
you better quit talkin shit.. before i call out them CRIPS AN HOUNDS
^good punch on the first line filler on the second......
to start SPITTIN ROUNDS and leave your whole family buried in a DITCH IN GROUND
^stupid line..........
i mean damn read your rhymes.. how much more stupidness can your LINES TAKE
kid you RHYME FAKE
half of your words are spoken with the intelligence of a PRIME APE
^Good punch only herbs cap their multis son .............
and all everyone does is read your VERSE AN LAUGH
cuz you rhyme like all your brain cells just BURST AN CRACKED,
^meh.....this an Ok punch.........
its easy to find mcs smarter than you just listen to a retarted PERSON RAP
WHY SHOULD I BATTLE WITH YOU AND WASTE MY TIME
ILL PUT A GUN IN YOUR 'MOUTH' AND LITERALLY MAKE YOU TASTE MY NINE
^Blah dude no....make it creative this line is so played ..........
even if you was an FBI AGENT and this battle was held over the ~PHONE~ you still couldnt TRACE MY LINES!!(their above his head)
so hey you fuck this fake vet.. he DICK LICKS
get put on my HIT LIST,
AIR your corny battle on MTV at 4:00 cuz your DIS'S' MISSED
good last line with the Dissmissed the Fbi thing was ok.......

Word i think LM took this because his shit was more personal so it hit harder in my mind.... no capps for your multis...some of your lines were stretched work on that...Lm if you coming with a punch that isn't a personal you need to make it harder than most of yours were peace out.........

strucuture-LM
flow- LM
punches- smiley
creativity- smiley
multis- smiley
metas-smiley
personals-Tie

LM- Your shit had good flow. Your opener an closer were both pretty creative. Sub par Tiger Woods line was played. Its just your punches in between the opener an closer were kinda weak. They didnt really connect with any force.

Your verse was desent, nothing too special. First of all ya structure could use some work, it was all over the place. Punches were pretty good. I liked the opener, nice personal. Mulis were killin it. Prime ape line was pretty good. Some lines were kinda wack tho like - "WHY SHOULD I BATTLE WITH YOU AND WASTE MY TIME
ILL PUT A GUN IN YOUR 'MOUTH' AND LITERALLY MAKE YOU TASTE MY NINE" Not a good punch.

OVERALL- gets my vote because his verse was just more creative and had harder punches. I was still pretty close

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aiight so thats 3 to 1.. uppin 2 more votes and i get the win

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single file, single files hoes come on in

damn man uppin again.................................

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This battle was damn nice..

It was really hard to decide who won this one, I can't criticize either one of you. Or give any advice.. but the way I see it is that LM even though ur punches were real personal and ur punches hit him hard. I think smiley's punches and lines just hit you harder, his creativity was surpassing everything else, and in my opinion he got you. Maybe would be different if u battled again.

vote- smiley

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111802
Hit this up ^^^^ Return favor.

Also if anyone can check out the battle in my sig on page.... 11?? I can't find it. I got 8 votes but up 4-1 and need it over with.

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