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Old 02-02-04, 12:42 PM   #1
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Best be Gone (wit yourself

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alrite now...
keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly
will gouge out anybodies Third eye
belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

my vain burdon drinkin plain burbon
that i play mentals like brain surgon
Joe's king of the hill bringin the kill
addictted 2 dope not clingin 2 skill
that and i be takin a smarter route
usually i be blazin a quarter ounce
no hero fight defy these sterotypes
wit zero might they whores for christ
really i do depsise skanks n whores
live filthy, so Soul what u bathen for?
structure for rules in vain I ignore
the Norm it aint allowed me, no more
so now I...

keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly
will gouge out anybodies Third eye
belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

Justice will never be done, some say
everyday ends the same in one way
life's too complicated for any gun play
complex like should I now run or stay
King Koopa ran away like everyday
Watch the cartoon* you 'tarded loon
i speak like anyother crummy goon
one of many from the dummy room
but i alone...

keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly
will gouge out anybodies Third eye
belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

this free flow is how my cold palms talk
devestatin everything likE bomBS dropped
against me? Who has sumptin 2 prove
like Winner take all i gott nuttin 2 lose
2% like im nothing what this crazy Is
fadin duh im more like what crazy does
walkin around town with a crazy buzz
like said my 2 cents is what crazy does
spit Mentality when i spit my rottin rage
ebs be decapitatin kats like Johnny Cage
cant be denied !!!

keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly
will gouge out anybodies Third eye
belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //
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Old 02-02-04, 12:54 PM   #2
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Yo, this is straight dope. Being a Christian myself, I feel this. I understand the concept of thought behind this. Props!! Cant really comment on the props and blah blah blah you know all that other BS that comes with posting. Yea, you did that. Oh by the way (FYI) the problem with most of us is we believe to be Christian is to be Christ-like. That's if you believe that was His name. It does however declare what He had and Who he was. Christ means "The Anointed one" thus making the "tian" mean "One who belongs to". Therefore EBS, most of our problems is trying to be like Him instead of just plain ole'belonging to Him. Keep posting and watching the watchmen: You have a duty and you know it. One
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Old 02-02-04, 06:16 PM   #3
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^ okay duke, you too! do your thing as well.
cause Wow, its like im a squad bombin evil.
I be too lazy for duties unless they boobies.
Thanx n all but UPP..
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Old 02-03-04, 01:38 AM   #4
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Old 02-03-04, 05:58 PM   #5
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Yeah this was pretty good here....structure was nice through out the piece i thought.....you had some good multies in this, i liked that.....content was good in there....vocab seemed alright in it as well....overall a good piece, liked the read...keep at it.
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Old 02-04-04, 05:53 AM   #6
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^ thanx, i try sumtimes

UPP-
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Old 02-04-04, 01:55 PM   #7
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UPP I Go !!
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Old 02-05-04, 04:35 AM   #8
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iight...

You need to sort out your structure... What is the point of //?

None what-so-ever...

Blah...

This piece was iight... Nothin really special... You did have some good concepts and ideas in there though...

Not a bad drop by you...

Jus fix ya structure and maybe flow it abit better...

Hit up my Open Mics in my sig in return please...

Thanks...

Pz...
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// <--- stopped the chours like duh
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Old 02-07-04, 05:06 AM   #11
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i say upp like duh
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