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02-07-04, 03:05 AM | #1 | ||||
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At Last Did We Win?
IP: 4577 CD9A
A Split Soul- Split SouL
Misunderstood- Inner Thoughts Body Emotions- Lady Wun A boy to a man decoy & they ran, to free the wingspand of locked bones, Whips that lash,flash hotter than hot-combs, their cries splash the wind, At last did we win? But foreva hopes high, as blacks we shall blend, Unite power, Bend the white's suspensions after the hour, 20w's, 100b's, Where's the man power? Lay leather strips, cripple my spine, Foreva behind, When not seen, my blinded brother, sisters ripped splien, You damaged her corpse, slit across her heart, damaged her gentle chest.. My baby brother and sister, for have mercy, and in peace, you rest... Leave you less stress, left lifeless, from tortue you leave, I'm left Chistless.. Daily I bleed, I proceed mentality warrior, African prince, at last did we win.. From the happiness we were sent, the way of life as it is, but breathin.. A big mistake leaving my loved-ones unguarded, For war to be started..... A warrior, I survived, but why have I come back heartless..................... Peace we invested in, lifes cost for black leaders, the whites confested it.. Equality at last, so did we win? No.. we still haven't had a Black President... Last edited by BombZ : 02-07-04 at 11:43 AM. |
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02-07-04, 11:45 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
uppin for looks
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02-07-04, 11:50 AM | #3 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: EC0B 84C7
nice drop. hard to follow but i enjoyed the multies. it had a little skip in this
one. lol. flowed well and sum nice complexity. i seen sum originality in this one too. not found too often in this. this was a good read. difficult to find its meaning but in the end, simple. keep at it man. hit up mine if you can plz. thanx pz
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02-07-04, 11:54 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Thanks, I'll do that...
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02-09-04, 12:45 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
uppin.............................
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