it was sweet n simple... nothing overbaring... i really enjoyed reading
it.... but personally i believe in fate... whats meant to be will be..
the only line i didnt like was the one with opressed depressed... that
just didnt make sense to me... other than that i give it a 5...
your vocab wasnt all that but you still held it down structure
was good tho... Keep Writing.

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