aight son......

10-12 lines

verses due next sunday night at 12 est

no feeding
no recycling
no biting

no crew votes
no hate votes
no dickriding

good luck dawg.......

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CHECKIN IN.......

yo ima be postin by this sunday night at 12 est though, cause i think 9 days is a gay amount of time to get done wit 10-12 lines.......

so u can post whenever u want........

peace.........

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check. ^Agreed

aight yo.......its about 7:30 est.......so check it out........yo, yo.........

ill snipe-in-a-blink, u cant see me kill ya, how the fuck u supposed to be good at rappin when u still like-nsync/
dawg, even ya cyphers-stink, now im at ur fag level when no one understands my punches unless i use these gay hyper-links/

It takes no effort to condense-this-hoe, and its pretty damn sad ur this slow to finally take offense-to-my-blows/
ur set to go, just leave, cause honestly ur wastin ur time cause its impossible to go "upstream" against-my-"flow"/

im fast to merk, just a blur-to-see, and u wanna be gangsta, so u sit outside wit water guns just to say ur a "gunner-to-be"/
in reality ur just a blunder-emcee, its weird how this is goin in patterns, cause just like "check ins", ur finishin "under-me"/


i still engage-to-aim, cause im shootin ya, and u keep a rhyme notebook, but shit, u suck at rap so page after page-is-lame/
u got no range-of-game, i mean shit, ur so wack no one on this site could tell u were tryin to "rap" so u had to "change-ya-name"/

ur crews "infected" wit wackness, and makin this "site-apear-sick", ur weak, and when i start typin u fight-but-fear-it/
ill ignite-ur-spirit, cause u suck, so leave the site and dont come back till uve figured out how to "write-lyrics"/

EXPLANATIONS- if u still dont get my punches, even after reading the explanations just dont vote......simple as that......

1st bar - if ur too lazy to click on the hyper links, his cyphers just suck ass, basic as hell, and in all of his battles he includes hyperlinks cause otherwise no one would get his punches.....

2nd bar - rivers flow, its hard to go upstream.....

3rd bar - i checked in first, he checked in under me.....

4th bar - to rap u spit lyrics, im sayin he sux so bad u couldnt tell he was tryin, and thats the reason for his name

5th bar - if ur infected ur sick, and his name is lyric

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~Yo Whackness Up~ in here, this preppies in the wrong game
Cause my rhymes surround you, like the lines around ya name
Your crew name gives false impressions, you only die like Soldiers dude
And I'm the Dynasty player ....... Except I'm not in ya whack ass crew
Like a newb you gotta scrolling sig, and not one person you beat is known
Gotta pretty nice record, but it dun mean shit if they're all herbs ya know?
From Phoenix, Arixona huh? I'll son you for sport like the B-Ball team retard
What dumbass takes his name from wannabe gangstas tryin ta sound hard?
I Just linguisticly merked your ass, like fat ass sunbathers 'ding' roll over
Ima lyrical sniper, Wit lyrical Bullets, Picking off wannabe Dynasty Soldiers

Uppin...Drop an honest explained vote here...drop a link and it will be hit

Yo what up was tight and had pretty decent punches at all with metaphors, but no wordplay whatsoever............yo what up needs to learn how to flow, his verse was kind of ill you could say jus a bit.........but da typed lines had no structure, lacked potential, looked newbish, and threw me off.........I had to read his bullshit twice jus to understand wtf he was saying.........anyways lyric did a good job all around especially with da personals which were better than any of yo whats up basic shit..........both of ya'll need to elevate but dis battle is far from whack and stil good..

vote= lyric

*vote on ma battles, thanks*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112785
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414

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^^^uhh yea......i did have wordplay dumbass........maybe u should read my bullshit for a third time........

whateva.......

uppin # 1.......

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yo dogs you two suck balls really bad when it comes to unerground battles in rapbattles.com/like too flows mis to ghetther a spit when it comes too a couple of lil girls sucking tits separated from my balls/. 1

Fag^ uppin 3

~Yo What Up~

ill snipe-in-a-blink, u cant see me kill ya, how the fuck u supposed to be good at rappin when u still like-nsync/
dawg, even ya cyphers-stink, now im at ur fag level when no one understands my punches unless i use these gay hyper-links/
really liked these first 2 bars, n-sync and hyperlinks were creative
It takes no effort to condense-this-hoe, and its pretty damn sad ur this slow to finally take offense-to-my-blows/
ur set to go, just leave, cause honestly ur wastin ur time cause its impossible to go "upstream" against-my-"flow"/
first line was kinda wack, not bad multis, second line was ok, i think i've heard that flow line before..
im fast to merk, just a blur-to-see, and u wanna be gangsta, so u sit outside wit water guns just to say ur a "gunner-to-be"/
in reality ur just a blunder-emcee, its weird how this is goin in patterns, cause just like "check ins", ur finishin "under-me"/
liked this alot, nice creativity, first line got a laugh
i still engage-to-aim, cause im shootin ya, and u keep a rhyme notebook, but shit, u suck at rap so page after page-is-lame/
u got no range-of-game, i mean shit, ur so wack no one on this site could tell u were tryin to "rap" so u had to "change-ya-name"/
nice flow, but kinda a weak bar
ur crews "infected" wit wackness, and makin this "site-apear-sick", ur weak, and when i start typin u fight-but-fear-it/
ill ignite-ur-spirit, cause u suck, so leave the site and dont come back till uve figured out how to "write-lyrics"/
kinda was expecting a stronger closer, but not bad, first line was kinda stretched too

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lyric

~Yo Whackness Up~ in here, this preppies in the wrong game
Cause my rhymes surround you, like the lines around ya name
funny opener, liked it alot
Your crew name gives false impressions, you only die like Soldiers dude
And I'm the Dynasty player ....... Except I'm not in ya whack ass crew
not bad, i think your dope opener makes this look weak, but not bad
Like a newb you gotta scrolling sig, and not one person you beat is known
Gotta pretty nice record, but it dun mean shit if they're all herbs ya know?
lol, i actually was thinking the same thing when i read his scrolling names
From Phoenix, Arixona huh? I'll son you for sport like the B-Ball team retard
What dumbass takes his name from wannabe gangstas tryin ta sound hard?
second line was funny, first was kinda choppy
I Just linguisticly merked your ass, like fat ass sunbathers 'ding' roll over
Ima lyrical sniper, Wit lyrical Bullets, Picking off wannabe Dynasty Soldiers
good closer, but i've seen better from ya

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Overall, damn this was really close, one of the better battles in here, but I'd give this one to lyric..better wordplay and slightly better with the personals..you two should consider a rematch in the future, dope drops to both..(sorry that I cant poll vote guys...soon though)

Please hit this back, thanks:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113096

"Like a newb you gotta scrolling sig, and not one person you beat is known
Gotta pretty nice record, but it dun mean shit if they're all herbs ya know?
From Phoenix, Arixona huh? I'll son you for sport like the B-Ball team retard
What dumbass takes his name from wannabe gangstas tryin ta sound hard?"

^^ These lines got it... nice personals

YWU had a choppy and stretched flow... some punches were aight but none hit too hard and i guess i saw a couple personals in their but i liked Lyrics better... Lyrics structure n flow was way smoother also...

the best line from YWU was prolly:

"dawg, even ya cyphers-stink, now im at ur fag level when no one understands my punches unless i use these gay hyper-links/"

^^ stetched but good personal and punch


Battle was aight... kinda close... but Lyric definetly got this

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not gonna break each verse down individually but here goes

punches:lyric took this category, he combined a lot of nice personals and punches together to make them more hard hitting and effective...yo, you had nice punches too but some were kinda played......

personals:both came pretty decent with the personals, you guys used some good stuff against each other but again i think lyric just dropped a little better with the punches

wordplay:lyric takes this, YWU, you have decent wordplay but your flow and shit was off in certain spots

creativity:both verses were creative in their own right, i think you guys tied in this category

overall:nice battle you two but i'm gonna have to give this one to lyric

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