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02-09-04, 11:28 AM
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Eddy.
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IP: 77D5 6AAD
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. I dont care,keep rejecting my submissions to me its.. a genre of art and literature that represents events of my social conditions An artistic movement W/ the abstract concepts exist independence of my self the twists that turned made it grow.. the inconvenience to oneself See life is just a mix, of realistic and factual descriptions Physical objects colliding..resulting, into a painting of.. Philosophical.. encryptions W/ attribute's of acceptions, & rejections, .. continued to exsist & failure growed in my mirror's reflections.. when my physical drove further from detailed.. i still stroved.. To that feeling that was not prevailed.. & the favoring, stayed unrewarded.. the walls came closer & closer. And i turned into a small wreck, fragile and..disorderd. Shit.
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02-09-04, 11:41 AM
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\/ pissing me off!!!!
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replys are so nice!!
lol, i liked this peice, nice immmagery, vocab was good, not really anything bad about it. the structure was very small! an it was a short piece!! keep it up edicius
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02-09-04, 11:44 AM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
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 Lmao...I can relate...LMao..This was Dope..Misfits~~~~~ |
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02-09-04, 11:51 AM
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Eddy.
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IP: 77D5 6AAD
^Word : D
~Misfits.
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02-09-04, 11:54 AM
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not bad
pretty raw piece seemed like u were getting something off your chest liked the rhyme scheme too.. suited the piece good key man |
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02-09-04, 01:30 PM
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^ Says It All ^
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^ You're Such A Wonka!
I Read This Before And I Liked It. Vocab Was Nice And Imagery Was Good. Like F-G Said, Seemed Like You Had To Get 'Shit' Off Your Chest. Nice Piece
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02-09-04, 01:42 PM
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"The Eleete"
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Nice! I like the way this worked! the vocab was ill.....dope short piece! haha some lines you had i can truly see happened on this site various times lol..........but good shit Ed!! If you got the time hit my latest........id love to get some of your feedback!
Foresight http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113141 |
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02-09-04, 02:09 PM
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New to RB
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it's alright keep it up but it needs some violence
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02-09-04, 06:19 PM
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uppin~~~M!sf!ts~~~~~~~~~~~(I'm getting carried away with this shit)
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02-09-04, 06:22 PM
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thought this was pretty good... the content favored it... ive seen better schemes from you....
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02-09-04, 06:50 PM
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Light Weight
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Ill For What It Was. . Emotion, Nice. . Content. . Honest And Dope. . Vocab, Where It Should Be. . I Should Read More Of Your Drops Shouldn't I ? Don't Answer That. . Just Keep Um Dropping. . And I Shall View. . Pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...376#post1168376 ^ ^ Return The Favor. Thanks.
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02-10-04, 11:30 AM
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Eddy.
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IP: 77D5 6AAD
Lol @ pen uppin for me .. = O Upppper,.
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02-10-04, 11:41 AM
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When a saw the title... A thought... Hmm... This is going to be {insert title here}...
But that proved me wrong... It was far from shit... Imagery was good... Flow was on... Structure eased the flow... All good... Nothing much to critisize... Only that it was perhaps too short... Maybe... Scraping the barrel there... Good drop Ed... Hit up the one in my sig... Thanks... Pz... |
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02-10-04, 12:57 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: 77D5 6AAD
Word its part of a collab thats why its short.. lol..ill hit one of yours up.
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