Check in, verse due within the hour...this would be my check of course

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Hey Man No Due Thing But Ill Get It Done As Soon As I Can And Whoever Gets Done First Juss Drop

Good deal playa..done here so I guess im droppin firrrst

Thinkin you fresh or new, wrong, all you are is asanine..
Hearin you spit is like hearin Lil Jon in his prime..
You "act" hard, well let me say you aint no Mekhi Phipher..
You wacker than that dude who wanted Xbox Live ciphers..
You'll pay the piper, for this one my verse is just nicer..
Your verse is LOADED with shit, I think you best whipe her..
My closer was weak last time so I'll just bail ya an..
Throw you back in rap jail, Ima lyrical stallion..
This closer's closer to puttin you back in your place son..
Leave this site or I'll cut off your Sir Q Layshun..

Peace..

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Fuck Knockin Ya Lights Out Im Cuttin The Power
Lost Ya Visions This Kids Softer Than A Flower
Y'd U Chose Me? Im Juss Givin U A 1st Loss
This Kid Isnt Gettin Very Far Like A Sumo Toss
Keepin The Peace Cuz I Always Pass A Fist*
Punches Dont Affect Me Like Sponges I Absorb Hits
Time To Say Good Knight Like Medievial Angels
Sir Is Givin You An L Like 90 Degree Angles
Like Garbage Planets Your A Waste Of Space
Throw You In Your Home To Put You In Your Place

I Know This Wuz Weak But Im Blocked Up Sry It Took Soo Long

pacifist is someone who believes in peace
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I dont have enough posts to officially vote but here is what I thought. Pretty close battle. Both verses flowed nicely and had good structure. Holmes Jr. had a few decent punches... Lil' John line was okay... wasn't feeling the line Makhai Phiper though. Also thought Holmes' had a weak ending with some
filler lines, including a personal that seemed played. Overall decent vocab, not the best verse as far as creatvity though. Sir Q'... really liked the
sumo line, and the 'pass a fist ' meta, however the opening lines were weak
and uninspired creativly. As was the closer, still though punches were decent. Vocab okay and a creative lines.

Flow - Tie (both had good flow/structure)
Punches- Holmes( barely, kinna weak from both)
Personals-Holmes(Even thought it was played still was better than nothing)
Vocab-Tie
Creativity-Sir Q. Layshun

My vote goes to Holmes Jr. although both had kinda' weak punches his just hit slightly harder. He also had a personal that was obvious which was still stronger than Sir Q's line a ' 1st loss '. Dope meta by Sir Q' and nice creativity but the punches really didn't hit hard enough.

blah uppin dont sleep on this one yall............

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upp yo comon lets get some fuckin votes up in hurr

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CUNTS QUIT SLEEPIN ON IT..vote got damn yall theres like 20 batts voted on and for some reason this ones way below all of em...please vote

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omg 0 votes after i come back hur like 3 days later FUCKIN VOTES PLEASE

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holmes:
Thinkin you fresh or new, wrong, all you are is asanine..
Hearin you spit is like hearin Lil Jon in his prime..
Aight
You "act" hard, well let me say you aint no Mekhi Phipher..
You wacker than that dude who wanted Xbox Live ciphers..
weak
You'll pay the piper, for this one my verse is just nicer..
Your verse is LOADED with shit, I think you best whipe her..
minor punch
My closer was weak last time so I'll just bail ya an..
Throw you back in rap jail, Ima lyrical stallion..
never admit you are weak, wtf...
This closer's closer to puttin you back in your place son..
Leave this site or I'll cut off your Sir Q Layshun..
Nice closer tho

Sir:
Fuck Knockin Ya Lights Out Im Cuttin The Power
Lost Ya Visions This Kids Softer Than A Flower
Nice first line opener
Y'd U Chose Me? Im Juss Givin U A 1st Loss
This Kid Isnt Gettin Very Far Like A Sumo Toss
nice
Keepin The Peace Cuz I Always Pass A Fist*
Punches Dont Affect Me Like Sponges I Absorb Hits
ok ok
Time To Say Good Knight Like Medievial Angels
Sir Is Givin You An L Like 90 Degree Angles
nice play
Like Garbage Planets Your A Waste Of Space
Throw You In Your Home To Put You In Your Place
Shitty close

Flow - None should get it, but i'll give it to holmes for havin one multi
Punches- again, its close, the punches weren't that good, but this goes to sir
Personals- I'm likin the first line, Sir
Vocab- Weak, but i'll give it to Sir for the pass a fist
Creativity- Sir

Vote - sir,

The battle was weak tho

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KayOhh vs John Dough ( round one )

KayOhh vs John Dough ( round two )

Appreciated

sir q layshun had a kool closer but other than that alot of the attempts at a punch were elementary.. flow was kool but somewhat simple and repetive.. holms started off weak but got better as he went, the shit/LOADED line was his hardest, consistancy is somewhat equal i'd give flow with a small edge to holmes.. and punches also with a small edge to holmes, so close but i think he took this vote-holmes return the favorwith an honest vote plz, no hate or beef

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