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02-09-04, 11:28 PM | #1 | |||||||
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A tribute to a Fallen Friend
IP: 9F7B 68DC
As I sit here, tonight as I write, I think of "the light", I think of my life
As I sit here, I sit here tonight, I think of myself, I think of my plight As I sit here, in life's mysterious ways, life is only a shade in there delirious days As I sit here, profoundly knowledgeable, I reflect on how life is astoundingly comical, always on time, and dumbfoundedly chronicle As I sit here, as I ponder and wonder, as I get old, life gets longer not younger As I sit here, with mistaken tragedy, a friend's life took too early, a conflict I had to see As I sit here, with a burden to carry, the spirit of friend, whom it hurt to burry As I sit here, with an evanescent memory, and reminisce respect you see...... to be continued |
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02-10-04, 08:29 PM | #2 | |||||||
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A Tribute to a Fallen Friend, revised and re-written
IP: 9F7B 68DC
ok, I started writing that last night but didn't get a chance to finish, so the last few lines were hurried, I finished it off and revised it today, here's the finished product, tell me that you think:
As I sit here, tonight as I write, I think of "the light", I think of my life As I sit here, I sit here tonight, I think of myself, I think of my plight As I sit here, in life's mysterious ways, life is only a shade, in these delirious days As I sit here, profoundly knowledgeable, I reflect on how life is astoundingly comical, always on time, and dumbfoundedly chronicle As I sit here, as I ponder and wonder, as I get old, life gets longer not younger As I sit here, with mistaken tragedy, a friend's life taken early, a conflict I had to see As I sit here, with a burden to carry, the spirit of friend, whom it hurt to burry As I sit here, with evanescent memory, I think of you, trying to reminisce a remedy As I sit here, moving on with my life, I think of the good times, and thank you for advice For if it weren’t for you, if it weren’t for your courage, I wouldn’t be here, writing these words For this I must thank you, again and again, I now say a friend is family, not just a friend is a friend For you I must express, my deepest sympathy, just to hear your breath, would be a symphony As I sit here, as time passes by, I think of you, and say goodbye as I cry For the time has come, there are no more words to see, although I could on, I speak into eternity |
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