Uppin for some fuckin votes, comon, wheres all the 100 posts peepz at???

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I know you cant vote massacre, but atleast give an opinion....

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uppin for some feedback here, comon, it would mean a lot

i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato
^^alrite.....
this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes
^^wak
i was like aight, but not my best stuff
he was like, thats fine but i messed up
^^wak-er
i said, i know dawg, dont be mad, ur from BC
so when i battle u, ill be sure to go easy
^^revise....but ok
maybe when ur nineteen ur get really lonely
but when im that age ill be drinken wit homies
who carez bout u?
hey dawg, because ur older than me doesnt mean u can compete
the only way this mothafucka could even compare is ta cheat
ok.....
and hes a lier to, says hes a mothafuckin engineer
between me and u, everyone knows whos the henchman here
^^finally a nice punch.....lol
u cant compare with my lyrics, its suicide to even try
gods on my side, and hates u, haha, only heathens die
^^gettin betterr
if he even goes the maximum twenty lines ill be suprised
his only goal in this battle, is ta try not ta die
^^weak
this bitch is maken a silk coat, look like a damn stone
i crushed through his jello, wait, that was a handbone!?!?
niceee clozer
total- 5/6-10


Despite, you pre-write, what you type, Im hop?in you can resite, somethin tight, I like,
I?d ask you to suck on this here hairy cock, but you seem like, the type, ta bite,
wtf.....
Posin as a D12 member, tisk tisk, didn?t wanna battle a celebrity, but you insist
I carefully calculate this, creating a collaboration like a chemist,
ok...
Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o
wak
la, Fuck the front lines, I belong on center stage, cuz my inner rage,
holds greater weight, turnin this thick paper to a thinner page;
nice...good shyt with that
You should go back to resite refine, your ragitty rhyme so its like mine,
So when it comes fight time, youre able to rock a tight chime;
oki dokie......
Cuz right now, its like a loose hoe, its sad how you refuse to go,
Despite all my intimidation, I enjoy your determination,
nice.....
Its cute how little you, is fuckin wit big me,
Lines so powerful, they jus snapped you like a twig gee,
nice.......
I don?t care what y?all say, this dudes rap belongs in a ballet,
I?m done with this wannabe gangsta, where?s my vallet...
ok.....
total=7/10...
u started out weak....but ended stronger
punches: ko....in the end his hit harder.....n had a few in da begginin
flow: tie.....both work on it
structure:both gotta work on it......
creativity: ko.....took time on hiz punches
vote: ko.....weak battle....but he took this

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Thx for the input, i'll work on it all,

uppin for some more input here?

kuniva takes dis shyt cuz he had better punches and his flow wus much better he won this battle with lines like "this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes" thats a personal and a punch......
Kayooh lost the battle with lines like this "Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o"
ok i dont know if that was punch/personal or anything but it sucked, it was very poorly written also you need to elevate alot before you win a battle if you really spit like this...
vote=kuniva

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Aight, thx, I think I had betta lines than
"this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes"
but, thx for the feedback

i would say that ko took this/ he had better flow, and then later on in his vere had better punches
kuniva was on and off/ sometimes he had nice punches, but at others they were wack
punches:" ko
flo: ko
structure: none
creativity: none
both elevate........
vote: ko....sorry i cant poll vote....but can u plze hit this battle up...thnx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113450

kuniva, not the best

kinda simple flow and not really the best punches

kayohh, i seen a different kayoh before and he was dope as hell,

your verse was aight,

the flow was good but the punches didnt conncet

so i gotta give this to kuniva

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kuniva
i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato
-played,punch,metiphore = 3
this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes
personal = 5
i was like aight, but not my best stuff
he was like, thats fine but i messed up
filler = 1
i said, i know dawg, dont be mad, ur from BC
so when i battle u, ill be sure to go easy
personal = 2
maybe when ur nineteen ur get really lonely
but when im that age ill be drinken wit homies
filler = 1
hey dawg, because ur older than me doesnt mean u can compete
the only way this mothafucka could even compare is ta cheat
-stretch,personal = 1
and hes a lier to, says hes a mothafuckin engineer
between me and u, everyone knows whos the henchman here
personal,metiphore = 3
u cant compare with my lyrics, its suicide to even try
gods on my side, and hates u, haha, only heathens die
punch,self hype = 3
if he even goes the maximum twenty lines ill be suprised
his only goal in this battle, is ta try not ta die
filler = 1
this bitch is maken a silk coat, look like a damn stone
i crushed through his jello, wait, that was a handbone!?!?
metiphore,punch = 5

I've only seen one worste so far on this site and that was retard101, don't worry tho his was alot worste. But yours was very bad, way too much filler you need to focus more on your punches than tryna tell a story. Basicly say one subject in each bar, dont carry one subject through 2 bars. Work on that.
Overall = 25
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KayOhh
Despite, you pre-write, what you type, Im hop’in you can resite, somethin tight, I like,
I’d ask you to suck on this here hairy cock, but you seem like, the type, ta bite,
-streched,personal,-multi,wordplay = 5
Posin as a D12 member, tisk tisk, didn’t wanna battle a celebrity, but you insist
I carefully calculate this, creating a collaboration like a chemist,
-stretched,multi,metiphore,vocab = 5
Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o
-filler,metiphore = 4
la, Fuck the front lines, I belong on center stage, cuz my inner rage,
holds greater weight, turnin this thick paper to a thinner page;
-multi,-self hype = 0
You should go back to resite refine, your ragitty rhyme so its like mine,
So when it comes fight time, youre able to rock a tight chime;
-multi,metiphore = 3
Cuz right now, its like a loose hoe, its sad how you refuse to go,
Despite all my intimidation, I enjoy your determination,
metiphore,-filler = 3
Its cute how little you, is fuckin wit big me,
Lines so powerful, they jus snapped you like a twig gee,
-self hype,metiphore = 3
I don’t care what y’all say, this dudes rap belongs in a ballet,
I’m done with this wannabe gangsta, where’s my vallet...
punch,metiphore = 5

My opinion way to many multi's. You focused way too much on the multi's creating alot of filler's and not enough punches. Quite honestly your a close third behind Kuniva and retard101 as the worste I have veiwed so far. Work on balancing you verse more, making it shorter by line and less multi more punch. Work on that.
Overall = 28
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Vote = KayOhh

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Oakley -v- Empire

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?t=112426\

yo i need one more vote on my battle hit that up

but this battle

vote- Kayohh

str8 took this one

muti's-kay took it wit these, both had over played rhymes but

vocab-kay, he da only one who had words rhymin other than line and rhyme

punches- both weak neither get it, kay was talkin bout him slef alot but cus of that

flow- kay, other guy had no multi's to flow to so there ya go

vote- kay
both need ta get some vocab and get some harder punches on the real

agian hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426

i'd apreciate it i won so it dont need much explainin just get dat last vote in peace
anyone else wanna battle me drop me a message

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