^Very True.... ..I thank you for reading my dreaful story~~

i think this finished it up nicely... but i think the first was the strongest of the three,... but this was still pretty consistant with the others..... the imagey and scheme matched up good....yeah a good ending.....

^thanks my very gay friend!

well now what can i say after all the positive replys and breakdowns, youve allready hurd basicly everything there is to tell you on account this peice was amazing. What a way to end the epic loved the ending. Vocab was amzing as usual and wordplay and structure were above avereage as well. damn you pen damn you

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I just read all three dawg, and man nothing I say could add to the already vast aray of compliments you've received. I loved the concept, loved the structure, loved the flow, it was truly unique. This is the kind of shit that gets slept on by the public but is loved by the critics.....you gotta gift man. loved the "juxtapostioning" by "ending" the song at the "beggining" . You're description was crazy, I'm a big fan of multi's and they we're hot too......outstanding job.
please peep my verses they aint as complex, and conceptually they're not as profound but I wrote it more mainstream.....I'd love your opinion.

^Thanks.... ^^

This Was Okay

i can see you live up to ur imagery name becuz with each line, the images
were given such detail that it brought the story to life. excellent on that behalf.
the flow was great and so was the consistency in this. the rhymes were ill
and present. the topic was amusing and it was neat how they all lead to something
new. at least to me. the complexity was another positive in thie. dope piece you
got here. almost as dope as my sig. lol. keep writin'

pz

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Ayo this was a serious nice nice piece yeah REAL nice...
i was feelin it both darts it was hittin mad hard... structure was nice
vocab was decent.. it was good tho... good read at dat
keep doin it dunno/// (and yo piece was just as long as mine)...
so just shorten'em up an this sould have been dope... kill it dunny

Caesar - On3

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