10 - 20 lines
spit within hour
no hate dr ......

Check..

i can read this guy like a book- and its a boring chapter
hes details aint even worth a look....
.. becaouse hes loss is already a factor
This newbie already admited he battles me for expirience
but he cant move to the groove of this game...
.... like lisening to OPERA and trying to dance...
after this battle even this newb will vote for me
wait .. RB should charge him... No VOTING.. and a wackness fee
Ill take sometime to give him so guidence.............
you dont have the fundamentals for this shit....
like a action movie........ with no violents
i spit at him like a lama..........making his pages wet
If i removed my name from the poll.... you still wouldnt be a safe bet
CHapter ill leave with the fact i never opened your profile
you couldnt rescue this battle..... if you had Token on your speed-dile

It appears ur the clown of the board.. an thas jus a quick assumption
ya name is used fa cussin.. by vets that laugh instead of punchin
Even the new guy can see that ya avatar is a symbol of ya ratin
cos on this site its known that neither of the above are existin
This battle was a joke and waste of time.. my worst ripped him
start beatin his face with my leg when his own verse kicked in
Your lines where kind of funny, they made me crack a smile see
I mean after readin them my bars are sure to break ya teeth
You won't win.. bet me silly.. you need to go and borrow skill
Your having a fucking three some with bad shitty and horrible
Pre-written? the speed in which u posted puts even FedEx to shame
uv been arounda long time.. an not one respectable win to ya name
Gott damn Eki!! I only called u out in the vain hope of elevatin
wot a mistake.. cos now im back to beatin noobs.. who always rise to baitin...//

pe-writtens? haah it really took me 5 min... no joke
anyways good shit.......

Eki - that opener was kinda predictable.. yeah it was personal but its a played concept wiv the 'loss already a factor' line.. it seemed kinda forced like u was jus lookin for a word to rhyme.. the 'opera' line was cool.. but the 'groove' line ruined it before hand.. i liked the 'action movie' line.. nice meta.. but u had a fair bit of filler in there an any decent lines u had seemed to come in 1's cos the accompanyin line would ruin it.. not bad overall but uv dropped hotter before.

Chapter - nice openin 4 lines.. very witty an the 'avatar' line got a chuckle.. u were consistant thru out altho in the middle u seemed to go a bit general.. but u finished wiv the best personal of the battle.. there were alot of nice metas in there.. jus work on not bein general at any point an look to sharpen the structure up.. but keep elevatin.. i see alot of potential.

VoTe = Chapter

Drop a vote here plz Eki:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120

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Keep votin people.. keep votin.

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callin out eki wadd up holla at cha boy cause tha rookie of tha year iz here

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Stfu 03..

-drop a vote-

plz.

I think I will break this down:
Punches: Chapter
Flow:Chapter
Structure:Chapter
Personals:Chapter

All in all a close battle but Chapter is victorious

Thank you..

-More votes plz-

Wanna start new battles..

Eki
i can read this guy like a book- and its a boring chapter
hes details aint even worth a look....
.. becaouse hes loss is already a factor
personal = 3
This newbie already admited he battles me for expirience
but he cant move to the groove of this game...
.... like lisening to OPERA and trying to dance...
personal,metiphore = 3
after this battle even this newb will vote for me
wait .. RB should charge him... No VOTING.. and a wackness fee
-self hype,metiphore = 2
Ill take sometime to give him so guidence.............
you dont have the fundamentals for this shit....
like a action movie........ with no violents
metiphore = 4
i spit at him like a lama..........making his pages wet
If i removed my name from the poll.... you still wouldnt be a safe bet
metiphore,wordplay,punch = 5
CHapter ill leave with the fact i never opened your profile
you couldnt rescue this battle..... if you had Token on your speed-dile
metiphore,punch,personal = 5
be advised I'm votign out of 10 not 5
This wasn't good but it wasn't horrible either. You need to put more thought into your lines and use more punches. Personal's are nice but only if they connect well. Work on that.
Overall = 22
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Chapter
It appears ur the clown of the board.. an thas jus a quick assumption
ya name is used fa cussin.. by vets that laugh instead of punchin
punch,-confusion,multi = 4
Even the new guy can see that ya avatar is a symbol of ya ratin
cos on this site its known that neither of the above are existin
personal,-played = 3
This battle was a joke and waste of time.. my worst ripped him
start beatin his face with my leg when his own verse kicked in
-self hype,wordplay,punch = 6
Your lines where kind of funny, they made me crack a smile see
I mean after readin them my bars are sure to break ya teeth
-feed,-feed,metiphore = 0
You won't win.. bet me silly.. you need to go and borrow skill
Your having a fucking three some with bad shitty and horrible
-flo,wordplay = 2
Pre-written? the speed in which u posted puts even FedEx to shame
uv been arounda long time.. an not one respectable win to ya name
-wrong,metiphore,personal = 4
Gott damn Eki!! I only called u out in the vain hope of elevatin
wot a mistake.. cos now im back to beatin noobs.. who always rise to baitin...//
personal,punch,-confusion = 5

This was OK not too bad. In my opinion better than Eki. Don't know what the numbers so yet but you oughta win this. You need to shorten all your lines up though, your right on the verge of bein very stretched. Also try and word some of your lines better, I got a little confused in 2 parts. Work on that.
Overall = 24
you see? the number's don't lie
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Vote = Chapter

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Oakley -v- Empire

? at the above vote.. but woot anyway!

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