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Old 02-11-04, 01:59 PM   #1
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A couple track off the "Rewind" Mixtape Vol.1

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Old 02-11-04, 02:00 PM   #2
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Old 02-11-04, 02:48 PM   #3
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First track: i aint feeling anything that isnt completely original..lyrics seem like they're falling off..2nd cat is dope..next time..leave the beat to Freeway he killed it better..

2nd track: i aint feeling this one bit to listen to it any longer..

3rd track: is this just a beatt?..so far i'm guessing yes..its tite..not realy my vibe..

the instrumental in all its glory was beter than the first two songs i heard..the 2nd rapper in the first track was sick..keep him around..each track was aiight though..the songs were made well and the quality was good also..i just wasnt feeling the vibes..its not my type of "go home and listen to this" music..but you're not bad musicians..

keep up the good work..pZ..
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Old 02-12-04, 01:07 AM   #4
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We run the city
NIce choice of beat......got me into the track but your lacking a little emotion men, the beat is a that pumps the audience....take advantage of that to get in more emotions...........your flow is ok but I think you could do much better.... the lyric's vocab and rimes are lacking a little........but anyway it's good but keep rappin men coz you got a hell of a voice

please return the favor plz
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Old 02-12-04, 01:12 AM   #5
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yo
i know u aint usin my name

fuck dat homie
somebody here bitin my name
nah fuck dat shit
fuck biters
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Old 02-13-04, 08:21 AM   #6
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Okay okay I'm listening...We Run City, nice lul(yeah lul) flow goin on over this Flipside sh*t...Who is the first dude...He killed that sh*t...Next time grown folks talkin shut yo ass up...The 2nd dude is nice with it too...Training Day is my type of beat...Orchestra, that brass horn sh*t...Oracles is a nice muhf*cka...Nicer than me...Not like I'm nice or anything...He real focused though...Good spittin voice...Addicted ain't a bad beat...Sounds like you was experimentin...Those synths don't fit here with the flutes...Those pizzicato strings are nice...You get a plus for using orchestra instruments...Heavy bassline is alright as well...All I could say is I'll meet ya'll at the top...
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Old 02-13-04, 10:03 AM   #7
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k yo...

1st track...

shit was nice... i mean ain't my style... but y'all got sum mad nice flow on it... lyrics was coo, flow was cool... mad hype me up track still.. kinda a drivin' down tha freeway type shit... the hook's niiice too... i like how it was blended..

yo stay up... do ya thang...

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114016
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Old 02-13-04, 11:29 AM   #8
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city runnin*

Flip-Side...

ha..

first off..

1st cat
ya rhyme scheme is >proper<...
quality is good...
you got nice mic precence and delivery...
good shit...

2nd.
cat sound exactly like Kurupt..
delivery and all..
nice spit...


nice drop..

indeed mixtape shit..

keep spittin...
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Old 02-13-04, 07:08 PM   #9
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OOO nevamind ma bad... ya name is orikle
rewinds jus da name of ya mixtape
o aight coo
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