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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Chapter | 4 | 100.00% | |
Eki | 0 | 0% | |
Voters: 4. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-10-04, 07:41 AM | #1 | |
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Chapter vs Eki
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10 - 20 lines
spit within hour no hate dr ...... |
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02-10-04, 07:42 AM | #2 |
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IP: B89A 3C2B
Check..
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02-10-04, 07:59 AM | #3 | |
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i can read this guy like a book- and its a boring chapter
hes details aint even worth a look.... .. becaouse hes loss is already a factor This newbie already admited he battles me for expirience but he cant move to the groove of this game... .... like lisening to OPERA and trying to dance... after this battle even this newb will vote for me wait .. RB should charge him... No VOTING.. and a wackness fee Ill take sometime to give him so guidence............. you dont have the fundamentals for this shit.... like a action movie........ with no violents i spit at him like a lama..........making his pages wet If i removed my name from the poll.... you still wouldnt be a safe bet CHapter ill leave with the fact i never opened your profile you couldnt rescue this battle..... if you had Token on your speed-dile |
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02-10-04, 08:18 AM | #4 |
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IP: B89A 3C2B
It appears ur the clown of the board.. an thas jus a quick assumption
ya name is used fa cussin.. by vets that laugh instead of punchin Even the new guy can see that ya avatar is a symbol of ya ratin cos on this site its known that neither of the above are existin This battle was a joke and waste of time.. my worst ripped him start beatin his face with my leg when his own verse kicked in Your lines where kind of funny, they made me crack a smile see I mean after readin them my bars are sure to break ya teeth You won't win.. bet me silly.. you need to go and borrow skill Your having a fucking three some with bad shitty and horrible Pre-written? the speed in which u posted puts even FedEx to shame uv been arounda long time.. an not one respectable win to ya name Gott damn Eki!! I only called u out in the vain hope of elevatin wot a mistake.. cos now im back to beatin noobs.. who always rise to baitin...// |
02-10-04, 08:23 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 126F 7328
pe-writtens? haah it really took me 5 min... no joke
anyways good shit....... |
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02-10-04, 08:27 AM | #6 |
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IP: B89A 3C2B
Eki - that opener was kinda predictable.. yeah it was personal but its a played concept wiv the 'loss already a factor' line.. it seemed kinda forced like u was jus lookin for a word to rhyme.. the 'opera' line was cool.. but the 'groove' line ruined it before hand.. i liked the 'action movie' line.. nice meta.. but u had a fair bit of filler in there an any decent lines u had seemed to come in 1's cos the accompanyin line would ruin it.. not bad overall but uv dropped hotter before.
Chapter - nice openin 4 lines.. very witty an the 'avatar' line got a chuckle.. u were consistant thru out altho in the middle u seemed to go a bit general.. but u finished wiv the best personal of the battle.. there were alot of nice metas in there.. jus work on not bein general at any point an look to sharpen the structure up.. but keep elevatin.. i see alot of potential. VoTe = Chapter Drop a vote here plz Eki: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120 ...1
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02-10-04, 08:38 AM | #7 |
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Yipee!
Keep votin people.. keep votin. |
02-10-04, 06:23 PM | #8 | |
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uppin ................................................ .............................................
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02-10-04, 06:31 PM | #9 | |
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callin out eki wadd up holla at cha boy cause tha rookie of tha year iz here
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02-11-04, 07:05 AM | #10 |
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Stfu 03..
-drop a vote- plz. |
02-11-04, 07:09 AM | #11 | |
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I think I will break this down:
Punches: Chapter Flow:Chapter Structure:Chapter Personals:Chapter All in all a close battle but Chapter is victorious |
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02-11-04, 07:19 AM | #12 |
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Thank you..
-More votes plz- Wanna start new battles.. |
02-11-04, 11:25 AM | #13 | |
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IP: 7EC9 3DD2
Eki
i can read this guy like a book- and its a boring chapter hes details aint even worth a look.... .. becaouse hes loss is already a factor personal = 3 This newbie already admited he battles me for expirience but he cant move to the groove of this game... .... like lisening to OPERA and trying to dance... personal,metiphore = 3 after this battle even this newb will vote for me wait .. RB should charge him... No VOTING.. and a wackness fee -self hype,metiphore = 2 Ill take sometime to give him so guidence............. you dont have the fundamentals for this shit.... like a action movie........ with no violents metiphore = 4 i spit at him like a lama..........making his pages wet If i removed my name from the poll.... you still wouldnt be a safe bet metiphore,wordplay,punch = 5 CHapter ill leave with the fact i never opened your profile you couldnt rescue this battle..... if you had Token on your speed-dile metiphore,punch,personal = 5 be advised I'm votign out of 10 not 5 This wasn't good but it wasn't horrible either. You need to put more thought into your lines and use more punches. Personal's are nice but only if they connect well. Work on that. Overall = 22 ---------------------------- Chapter It appears ur the clown of the board.. an thas jus a quick assumption ya name is used fa cussin.. by vets that laugh instead of punchin punch,-confusion,multi = 4 Even the new guy can see that ya avatar is a symbol of ya ratin cos on this site its known that neither of the above are existin personal,-played = 3 This battle was a joke and waste of time.. my worst ripped him start beatin his face with my leg when his own verse kicked in -self hype,wordplay,punch = 6 Your lines where kind of funny, they made me crack a smile see I mean after readin them my bars are sure to break ya teeth -feed,-feed,metiphore = 0 You won't win.. bet me silly.. you need to go and borrow skill Your having a fucking three some with bad shitty and horrible -flo,wordplay = 2 Pre-written? the speed in which u posted puts even FedEx to shame uv been arounda long time.. an not one respectable win to ya name -wrong,metiphore,personal = 4 Gott damn Eki!! I only called u out in the vain hope of elevatin wot a mistake.. cos now im back to beatin noobs.. who always rise to baitin...// personal,punch,-confusion = 5 This was OK not too bad. In my opinion better than Eki. Don't know what the numbers so yet but you oughta win this. You need to shorten all your lines up though, your right on the verge of bein very stretched. Also try and word some of your lines better, I got a little confused in 2 parts. Work on that. Overall = 24 you see? the number's don't lie -------------------------------- Vote = Chapter |
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02-11-04, 02:50 PM | #14 |
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? at the above vote.. but woot anyway!
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02-11-04, 03:00 PM | #15 | |
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Chapter wins this shit....Eki you had some good punches and personals but some of your lines didn't rhyme...i don't always rhyme perfectly either but I couldn't even force them into rhymes....Chapter was very thorough in his verse...lot's of punches..nearly every line....and he had a lot of consistancy with his style and his strength and wittiness of his punches...he just kept coming at you..
Break down Wordplay-Chapter Meta's- Chapter..he was just fucking hilarious structure-chapter-nice even bars personals-tie not mant from either of you Punches-chapter-hard blows..constantly sust-chapter.. overall-Chapter Eki...i like you...I like your style and a lot of your drops...in this contest you were bested though...and I think you know it...Keep elevatin, your gettin tighter. My Vote goes to Chapter..the underdog I thought coming in to this. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614 |
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