yo 10 line 45 mins normal rules

Now heres a young man lusting for a merking...
i'll wipe that smile from your face, then we'll see who's smerking.

tryna bitch slap me, pussie, you'd have some trouble...
you measure up 3ft 3, my fuckin dick is double...

your not lovable, your whack, you like a bitch on hemoroids...
fuckin tryna rap, you sound like pee wee herman on steroids..

here the noise? no i didn't think they'd like you....
looking all suprise, like a cyclone hit you...

your pathetic, idiotic, better yet a fuckin mockery...
i'll expose your whackness, like you were on pornography...

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set-ignorance just b/c u get no ass doesnt meen ur practice abstinence
ur like a school girl and the sex is just absent
ur cyclone line is whack, u forgot to thank 8 Mile
next time u step to me, get ur own style
ill merk u like the herb u are and throw u in the junk pile
my lines will smuther u , like u in a blizzard
u dont wanna fuck with me im a lyricaly wizard
u battling me , really got me pissed
but all ur punches sucked and missed
this battle is over i guess u were Dismissed

the 8 mile line i was talkign about is

eminem : "looking liek a cyclne hit u
tank top screaming lotto i dont fit you"

lyrical not lyricaly my bad

Yea w/e... Anyways.. Uppin...........................

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nice battle good luck

weak battle no hard punches thrown structure n flow were tied but lust go over on set cuz of the 8 mi line n cuz "your not lovable, your whack, you like a bitch on hemoroids...
fuckin tryna rap, you sound like pee wee herman on steroids.." that was prob the worst thing ive eva herd in my life
vote=lust

thanx crunch

Uppin C'mon peeps............................................. .....................

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Uppin y'all... Don't sleep on this stuff, tis important to us both ... Peace

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ur cyclone line is whack, u forgot to thank 8 Mile
next time u step to me, get ur own style

^^lust won with this line right here..

i was thinkin the same thing b4 i got to his verse.. i knew i seen that shit somewhere b4, also pee wee herman on steroids, im pretty sure that was also from the movie.. man dont bite, and of all people some one everyone will recognize.. so for more originality and better disses/flow this battle goes to lust, vote lust return an honest vote on this, no beef or hate http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113774

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