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Old 02-10-04, 10:38 PM   #1
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Valentines Day poem

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The most beautiful day of the year cant compete with the most beautiful woman
Ive told you that "I love you" so many times but this day it will finally be proven....

Its the most joyous thing when youre happy
and im glad you are when you stand by me
your eyes twinkle more brilliant than the stars
beauty so stunning that breathes would pause
I feel so lucky to hear your heartwarming laugh
so I hope you can leave all your pain in the past
hopefully, we can be together every valentines day
I love you so much and for us, everynight I pray

I'll never get tired of staring into your eyes
I'll never be to busy to tend to your cries
I'll never put a hurtfull hand on your face
I'll never be too far away from your grace
I'll never be to proud to say that im sorry
I'll never have a doubt in my mind that you love me

I'll do anything for us to get married
for you I'll always stay loyal and caring
I'll care and cook for you everyday
and I'll make you happy in everyway

This might not be the most beautiful poem youve ever heard
but im hoping it will be the most beautiful one written in words
understand that I'll always be here to share your tears
and now the only fear is that our love will disappear
but i trust that will never happen because "I love you"
your feelings are the same when you say "I Love you too"
I love when you smuther me with "tu carino"
y con nomas tres palabras yo brillo
just with "I Love you" my soul feels free and even though
we fight, i know you'd never destroy our love and break my soul
I'm so happy i met you that summer, cause love would never know
how much i adore you and how big it could ever grow
I can love you like no one else can
for now and forever, I Love you Razan





the title explains the topic, just a love poem for my girl.
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Old 02-11-04, 05:24 PM   #2
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yo this is a reel gud poem it reely duz show that u love her.... keep droppin

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I'll never get tired of staring into your eyes
I'll never be to busy to tend to your cries
I'll never put a hurtfull hand on your face
I'll never be too far away from your grace
I'll never be to proud to say that im sorry
I'll never have a doubt in my mind that you love me
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JUST TRY AND STOP ME !!



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Old 02-11-04, 05:56 PM   #3
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thanx, thats what i was aiming for, uppin
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Old 02-16-04, 05:28 PM   #4
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Uppin. feedback would be appreciated.
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