what are u talking about TJ its over there is no going again!!!!!!!!!!!uppin this mo fo........*1*

Aight nigga I'll see you on the flipside!..................................

ightt nigga u dont want none i wasnt even trying in that battle.....but what ever the fuck ever when this is done if u want a rematch i would love ta merk ya..........peace nigga.........(no beef)

TJ =

Hard-hit-ta is a child molestes-ta yo....
He got that Micheal Jackson Icon and-his name-gives-him-away O…I C
What, and who you B…stay your distance U homo-sexual M C,
rubbish lines
Yeah…you like Mic Checkin don’t you?
You come the battle?
You gonna leave typing with your brain half scrambled cuz-of-da-way I made it rattle...
blah, ya need to sort it out
U sex craz, I’m more deranged
I’ll drag you outta my range and beat your ass wit paddle that is wooden in the rain cause’ll-sting more when its wet micheal…
I’m Pulp fiction and-M-Cee’s need to listen trust, Hard-hit-ta leavin-da-forum bitch’n
na, rubbish also

hardhitter =

TJ ya willingly geting handed a loss ya fake and soft..
im not even gunna try cuz 2 lines is blowin ya off..
ok
like a dust dust breez in the wind,,
your wack at hart,no beef dont start..
cuz your lines are faker then a whoopie cushin fart.!!
ok,lol
you gettin hit in every direction.like talibins robbin a mighty mart..
dont start son i will rip you apart..
your just another skinny lost nigga livin in the dark..
umm
jump quick ta this call out!??
no need nigga i see you tryed to go all out..
but ya not suceeding like a high school drop out...........
ok
your quick ta cop out thought u was gunna be another no show..
but u came in with 1 of the gayest flows/////
ummmok
who knows maby u will blow but i aint goin in the direction as this fag.......
pop shit again your ass will be found in a body bag............nigga........
better end than him


this battle goes to hard hitter for better punches flow and structure, tj ya need to elevate your spitz dude.

vote = hardhitter

uppin this shit...................leave a link and ill hit it up...........uppin

TJwillingham
Hard-hit-ta is a child molestes-ta yo....
He got that Micheal Jackson Icon and-his name-gives-him-away O…I C
What, and who you B…stay your distance U homo-sexual M C,
-confusion,personal = 1
Yeah…you like Mic Checkin don’t you?
You come the battle?
You gonna leave typing with your brain half scrambled cuz-of-da-way I made it rattle...
-played,punch,metiphore = 1
U sex craz, I’m more deranged
I’ll drag you outta my range and beat your ass wit paddle that is wooden in the rain
-strecthed,multi,-pointless,-filler = 1
cause’ll-sting more when its wet micheal…
I’m Pulp fiction and-M-Cee’s need to listen trust, Hard-hit-ta leavin-da-forum bitch’n
-flo,-structure,-retarded,metiphore,-confusion = 0

The absolute worste I have veiwed here so far. Terrible beyond belief. Im not going to give advice. Just Quit. You don't belong doing this. It's a waste of every one that try's time.
Overall = 3
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hardhitter
ok....ok.....ightt.....yo...
TJ ya willingly geting handed a loss ya fake and soft..
im not even gunna try cuz 2 lines is blowin ya off..
punch,metiphore = 3
like a dust dust breez in the wind,,
your wack at hart,no beef dont start..
cuz your lines are faker then a whoopie cushin fart.!!
-filler,multi,metiphore = 3
you gettin hit in every direction.like talibins robbin a mighty mart..
dont start son i will rip you apart..
your just another skinny lost nigga livin in the dark..
metiphore,-filler,punch,metiphore = 3
jump quick ta this call out!??
no need nigga i see you tryed to go all out..
but ya not suceeding like a high school drop out...........
personal,-repetivness,metiphore = 2
your quick ta cop out thought u was gunna be another no show..
but u came in with 1 of the gayest flows/////
-feed,punch = 2
who knows maby u will blow but i aint goin in the direction as this fag.......
pop shit again your ass will be found in a body bag............nigga........
metiphore,punch,-played = 4

A weak verse but not a terrible one. Your worste part was that out out out bar. It really required no creativity what so ever and it was filled with a fairly weak highschool metiphore. You were short and to the point which was good. And your last line was your best even tho the body bag concept is quite played. Work on the creativity.
Overall = 17
and mind you....this was out of a possible 60 not 30
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Vote = hardhitter

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Uppin this mo fo leave a link and ill return the favor.......................uppin.......*1*

hardhitter verse hit hard unlike the opponent, "hard" had nice structure and wordplay"
the opponent definently needs elevation
my vote -- Hardhitter

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hardhitter, nice verse, you had some dope punches in their,
like the whoopie chsion one, structure was pretty good, not
much to say about it though, your opener was dope too,
next time put some personals in their dawg, same thing with
multis, its all good though, keep elevating, peace.

Tj, decent verse, nothing really caught my eye, just another
wanna be emcee, you got to work on your punches dawg, you
thorugh alot of them but they were weak, you also need some personals
and multis, but keep elevating dawg.

my vote: hardhitter

hit up any of my battles!!!

leave me the link.............................UPPIN...........

Hardhitter Won But Hes Not A "seal The Deal" Mc
I Want Both Yall Wack Fagets... Come Battle A "real" Mc

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Im tight with the steal dude, but you can look in my eyes and see for yourself I don't need one to kill you.

..............................................plea zzzzzzzzzzz 1 more vote................

that was a tight battle.........hardhitter got ya good

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v/hardhitter

you had better pumches then this cat and he isnt even on this site anymore......your structure was okay but could use some work

j-you need to elevate......work on your punches cause they dont hit hard at all and your structure i didnt really like either......pc

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