So. . I Was Thinking. . How The Hell Could I Close This Album ? Then, The Idea Hit Me. . Why Don't You Tell Them Someting ?. . I Said To Myself. . Self, That's A Hell Of A Idea. .

Ayo, I Flirt With The Idea Of Exposure. . Maybe Even Hug It. .
They Say I'm Slow, But They'll Be At My Observed Pace When The Slug Hits. .
What's The Truth ? When It's Covered By Lies And Deceit. . .
I've Seen Many A Tear, Many A Problem Just Walking With These Feet. .
See, My Parents Told Me To Do Something Productive With My Life. .
So I Practiced Math On Pages, Till My Equations Had The Product Bein A Mic. .
I'd Write, Day N Night. . . Became Quite Nice N Impressive. .
But, Yep, You Guessed It, Here Comes Strife To Halt Progression. .
Damn, Hold It Down, They Said My Kind Of Music Was Too Loud. .
But I Was Too Proud, Hip Hop's Fading. . Can You Please Feel It Now ?
And Feel In Tune, My Style, Second To None, Twice Above The Top. .
It's Sometimes Blind, But Even The Dark Glasses Wearing Man Loving My Drops
Make Sense When I Rhyme. . . I Make Cents With My Lines. .
People Wonder Why I'm Broke. . . 'Cause My Mind's Spent Every Dime. .
Now If I Slow My Pace. . It's Only 'Cause Rap's Got Me Asthmatic. .
Me Taking My Ass To Mainstream Is Like Travelling Ass Backwards. .
You Wanna Know About Me ? Hit The Books, Journey Through Research. .
Was A Simple Kid. . But With These Words. . I Earned Me A Rebirth. .
I'm Not Kidding, My Inspiration. . Poppy. . I'm Coming To Visit. .
You With Me In Spirit, I Guess That's Why I Forget Bullshit When I Hear It (Just Like You Did)

[Chorus]
You Wanna Know About Me ? Fix Your Stereo Treble. . .
Let My Sound Evolve Around N Then You Get Settled. . .
It's Story Time Kids. . Gather N Really Closely Listen. . .
You Wanna Know About Me ? Take This Trip With Attention. .

Formula, Me, You See. . I Can Ride Mind States. . .
I Create. . . A Notion That Collaborates With All Motion. . .
. . . N Changes The Human Race. . .
Always Had An Outlook, Like I Could Make Somethin' Dramatic Happen. .
But I Was Studown, Nobody Wanted To See Another White Kid Rappin'. .
I Didn't Wanna Ever Bring Up Race, But All I Heard Was "You're Fucking White!"
Yeah, N I Know My Rights. . So I Know I'm Free Write, Riiight ?
Parents Even Frowned Upon It, Didn't Like The Content Bein' Explicit. .
But THese Are MY Lyrics, With Emotion Used To Overdosing When I Hear It
Growing Up Was Tought, Anybody Ever Felt Like You Didn't Fit In ?
Like Friends Were A Puzzle, And You Needed A Certain Curve Or Edge To Begin
To Put Shit Together, I've Seen The Weather Sunny And Then Gloomy. .
But Try N Budge Me From My Dream, I'll Just Sleep While You Try N Move Me
Music Is My Life, Understand, If I Fail. . . Shit Will Disappear. .
And I Fucking Hate Magic. . . . Just Thought I'd Make That Clear. . .
I've Asked If Ya'll Could Feel, Told You I'd Make It, N Made A Statement. .
Doper Than Thou, I've Looked For Love And Wanted To Talk, Memories Restate Shit
It's A Man's World, N I Got MC's Squared, Ink Bared, Ready To Take Shit. .
Hear Me Out. . *brief pause*
If Any Song You Hear Cries. . . And The CD Gathers Some Moisture. . .
You'll Know I Gave My Heart, Fuck Money, I'd Rather Own N Be Apart Of The Culture

[Chorus]

Yes. . You Have Made It. . A Quick Ride Through My Mind. . Time To Say Goodbye. . . Just For Now Though. . Big Up's To Everyone Who Supported Me. . Love Me For Me. . I Am What I Say I Am. . The Future. . Doubt Me. . And Watch Me Prove You Wrong. . Fuck The Haters, Love To Those Who Down For Mines, That's Word. . I'm Out. . Hope You Enjoyed This. . Peace. .


Yea, this is the outro for my CD, hence the end. Bars 15, 16, 17 are plays on names of the tracks on my album. . (Can You Feel Me ?, Make It, Doper Than Thou, Lookin' For Love, I Jus Wanna Talk, Memories, It's A Man's World, mE = everyMCsquared) I've dropped all those songs here except It's A Man's World, hope ya'll enjoyed it. . *cough* OM of the Month if you get some of the lines *cough* Damn. . E-Cold. . Pz.

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dope drop man. impressive. shoulda wrote an autobiography instead. lol. nah j/k.
it was a good read. sum lines seemed a bit stretch but the flow was excellent.
the consistency was nice, especially for sumthing complex to write about, at least
i'd like to assume so seeing as how you're human. but yeah, this was a good
read. everything was nice, the only thing i had a problem with was the capitilization
of the first letter of EVERY word. lol. but if thats how you imagine words. thats coo.

keep tite.

hit this up wen ur not busy.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112882

pz

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Good work...I read this on SL I think? anyway...something different from you..very impressive..but..you need to stop streching your bars so long....it seems as you are forcing'em..not cool~~this was a very nice drop indeed~good~job~Click on my sig.."Elements of Life"...it's dope!!! *Legendary* LMao

Wrd, thanks for the feed. . I got both of ya'lls coming. . uppin for more, Pz.

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--[Flow]---
Wow....flow was totally off-the-hook....i think because this is written for audio that i could follow it all the way through...with most text pieces i need to read bars a few times to get the flow but here i just realised your fluently and followed it throughout....the beat was in my head, and i look forward to seeing this in audio.

--[Vocab]--
Vocab as well was dope....your rhymes were complexiated with depth and meaning, which was nice to see...you refrained from using 3 letter rhyming words and this really helped the flow...:
"To Put Shit Together, I've Seen The Weather Sunny And Then Gloomy. .
But Try N Budge Me From My Dream, I'll Just Sleep While You Try N Move Me" - brutal.

--[Concept]--
Yea, this was nice for an outro to an album....you covered alot of relative topics, although some might say the portrayal of "Another White Kid Rappin'" is played but i thought it fitted in nicely....Loved the way you inserted mathematics into this piece, thought this bar was mad creative:
"See, My Parents Told Me To Do Something Productive With My Life. .
So I Practiced Math On Pages, Till My Equations Had The Product Bein A Mic. ."

--[Overall]--
Loved your flow (yea, some bars were stretched but when i read it, it just flowed consistantly and fluently ), you had alot of memorable bars in there, defiently being nominated for OM of the month thing...4/5...keep this shit up, and notifty me when it's up in audio.