just felt like keyin somethin up

yo on stage its Syck blazin scrypts, spittin only amazin shit
my fists grazin lips.. hits have ya eyes squintin like asian kids
raps set a fire.. no vets admired come at me you best retire
this text is higher.. the latter to evolve? ive stepped it prior
on the mic vocal chords explode with one note its so dope
leave ya with no hope words stuck inside of ya choked throat
nose broke from the first swing, its wackness ya verse brings
its worse-ning.. they say im insane becuz i like to hurt things
quick drop off the top.. still unstoppable, Syck is not a fool
& i'd try to execute right from wrong.. but i forgot the rules
foes get dropped in duels, thats right ya heard of my type
so bright.. words burnin ya sight with the words that i write
so in conclusion ima battle animal.. rippin apart ameteurs
scavengers i aint havin ya.. 1 step Syck quick to damage ya

MmmmmmmmmK...

Nice little verse...

Wordplay was utilized.

A meta was thrown in.

Flow was on mark...

Multi's did their thing.

But the topic?

Booooooorrrrrrrring!
(notice I capitalized the B)

Nice intro to ya skills, but Open Mic is really for more meaningful shit...
(at least we try and keep it that way)

This was a battle verse, plain and simple.

A pre-write that you coulda dropped anyone's name into.

Nice, but nothing that makes me a fan of yours.

Peace

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if it makes u think any different i did it in less than 10 minutes lol.. thats all it was was an intro.. i was bored.. didnt feel much like a topic or wasting punches.. so it was flow and statement.. thanks for peepin anyhow

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replied to like 6 joints cant any of you assholes return a favor.. god damn..

tight drop. the multies didn't seem forced so thats a big positive.
hot vocab and the structure was near flawless. the topic was nice,
but common. but no matter, this made for a great verse. the consistency
as well as the metas are commendable. keep writing.

pz

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Flow and rhymes were very good. As an introduction you did what you wanted. Just whatever you do next make it more complex (topic not rhyme scheme). As far as battling goes I would say you've got the skills necessary. I can't say how you do on dropping OM's though until you do. I'll be looking out for your next piece though. So keep writing.

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people act like its hard to read something and reply to it.. ive replied to quit a few joints

Intresting keep em coming and have the others running
its the sharks

for all the members there are on this site you woudnt know by reading some ones replies...................

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Nice intro peice you dropped nice vocab good shceme and it flows like sewage pipes even tho it wasn't shitty anway good drop

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