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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Chapter | 2 | 100.00% | |
BlackGrenade | 0 | 0% | |
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02-10-04, 07:38 AM | #1 |
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BlackGrenade Vs Chapter
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10 lines min 20 Max
no crew votes no d/r chapter spits first!
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02-10-04, 07:43 AM | #2 |
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Check..
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02-10-04, 07:44 AM | #3 |
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Check...
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02-10-04, 08:01 AM | #4 |
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Its clear this chump is new to RB.. as well as the whole rap game
cos really.. wot kinda idiot publicly guns his own name?? The fact is that all who attempt get violated rather quickly Have ya so full of holes ya clothes look like they made of swiss cheese Put ya whole career on a sculpture.. it'll lack the views u cant fuck wit me.. it'll take me hours to spit wack as u I'll wreck the best text shit ya said.. son ya as good as dead ya idea's aint clickin in? i'll 'leave' you open minded when bullets exit ya head Ya wack ass bars.. dawg its simple, u aint competing with the best like Jordan back thru time.. ill have ya wit a .45 at ur back.. n '23' in ya chest.../// |
02-10-04, 08:46 AM | #5 |
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oh yeah see i only have ten lines but my layout is dif so it takes up more room than i expected! good luck
1.First off a Black grenade aint a gun so its plain to see im gonna have ya on the run 2.you must be a cross between a bulldog and a shitsu - bullshit thats why your lines stink like u stepped in it 3.are u a virgin to rap? i mean who starts off with a name attack which ends up to be a lame attack 4.you need to face the facts cause if ya wanna battle me you have to try to rattle me 5.but im steady as a rock and you bout to feel an lyrical shock bet u were hysterical the first time u tried cock 6.which way do u wanna go - i mean ya got no flow your punches are weak you must be a freak thats why your lines reak 7.when u checked into the mental hospital wat did they say - they said this patients to fucked to stay 8.but they let u go out and play wat an age we live in were retards / are free to get new starts 9.so better change ya name cause this is the end of the game GAME OVER your neva gonna be the same 10.let me put the last nail in the coffin this is why u didnt last cause you couldnt handle the blast from the BlackGrenade!!
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02-10-04, 10:45 AM | #6 | |
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IP: B89A 3C2B
Chapter - another nice verse.. an u won it based on ya opener alone..
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iv been waitin fa someone to put the machine gun pic in the wrong place! Consistant punches.. alot of nice concepts there.. but u do go off point a bit an get somewhat general.. then again ur new here so ya not likely to know much about people.. overall a pretty dope verse kid.. Grenade - eh the style has gotta change quick man.. puttin 1. blah blah blah, 2. blah blah blah etc jus aint cool.. an u used alot of unecessary words jus to create a rhyme but it was heavily stretched.. any punch was lost by the time u finished the line.. the structure is weak too.. u need to diss ur opponent more directly an get a bit personal.. VoTe = Chapter
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02-10-04, 02:09 PM | #7 | |
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um yea black that was really bad u dont number ur stuff it didnt really have a flow backslashes would help punches didnt make sense no personals really u need to elevate. u repete ur self
now for chapter u did good good flow pretty good punches a couple personals no multies but a good battle keep up the good job
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02-10-04, 02:10 PM | #8 | |
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o vote on the battles in my sig heres the link tho http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111755
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02-10-04, 02:43 PM | #9 | |
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my vote chapter yo im me on aim some time peece 1
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02-11-04, 07:07 AM | #10 |
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IP: B89A 3C2B
-keep votin-
lookin to finish this.. |
02-11-04, 03:35 PM | #11 |
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IP: 1495 6CD9
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02-12-04, 07:42 AM | #12 |
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Drop a vote plz.. other guy aint botherin to upp cos he's gonna lose.. smh.
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02-13-04, 05:32 AM | #13 |
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02-17-04, 06:09 AM | #14 |
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IP: 1495 6CD9
Yo UNDEAD aka BlackGrenade.. ur a damn coward for not uppn this.. fukk u man.
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