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02-13-04, 06:56 PM
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nice man. prop the best thing iv read on this forum.... peace
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02-13-04, 07:22 PM
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man....nice......this was a well thought out peice...i really liked the concept.....and the fact that it was all true, the words ran together nicely, which made it flow well, the multi's and style you chose were put together nicely, a well written objective narrative......nice work......
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02-16-04, 02:28 PM
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dope becuz every word of its true......everything was good here....Pen you kno the drill....shit was hot.....
all i have to say....
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02-16-04, 02:32 PM
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You're definately a good writer. But with all these people on your jock, you're head is already starting to get bigger than Cam's. You might need to go outside. You're averaging like 27 posts a day and feeding off all these people telling you you're good. Go play tag or something. Good writing though.
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02-16-04, 03:08 PM
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so i am a VET then? YEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHHHH
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02-16-04, 03:22 PM
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 ..I don't think this was all that good...I thought this was average..LOL....Thanks though.... |
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02-16-04, 03:37 PM
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^^^^No not average, horrible is the direction i'm leaning into
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