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02-13-04, 09:53 PM | #1 | |||||||
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...i shaLL caLL you...Truth
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the definition of accpetance
the rose the depth of the sea the hope the substance that is pure the growth i can rest assured i can fLoat a freefaLL descent carvin' waves of time sorrow and hate i guess it is fate I Love you is aLL i wrote i'll go around dropping feed, sorry, this is kinda weird... i guess i went for the symbolism more than anything... i hope someone can saysomething cool.... -Love-
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02-15-04, 08:43 PM | #2 | |||||||
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again the short piece is slept on...
u hit symbolism on the head of the nail... wit the symbolism u brought in the emotion which is what made this piece good... short but sweet lol
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