{{originally posted by cruelintentionz}

lets go homie

yo im lyrically invincible, and im comin on head strong//
ive eaten too many emcees, i think this haters bout to get pissed on// u dont got a chance in this battle, youre better off sucking a dick, so call me a dyke, cuz dont no rapper really wanna fuck with this//why do you rap knowing you wack? you act up, i'll throw ya punk ass down a cement flight of steps, then throw you back up 'em// with a microphone in my hand i cause more damage than a twister, betta fix ya raps cuz caps blast faster than twista's raps// im a genious with a microphone, a lyrical crucifier// dont close ya mouth, i'll do it for you, and you'll be spitten "thru tha wire"//

no disrespect dawg just battlin

aiight your turn}}

thats him and ill spit shortly

aight here it is my first battle, yo yo yo

man this aint a joke no more this is the real shit,/
you gotta be a man and step out ya mommaz closet/
ill make lyrical incisions with precision on ya punk ass/
dump ya body in the street cause you only worth trash/
thanks fa' spittin, you put a smile on my face cause i know im winnin/
you like a chevy and im a semi on this battle collisoin/
ill rip out yer intestines and suck out ya fuckin tongue/
your skills are undeveloped like a little girl young/
i got 2 lines left sweats droppin down ya face/
my spits likes mace in ya face and this battle im first place/

lets get some votes..sorry about the other thread i fucked up..my first time so ya
peace

nigga lets go ill battle u

need sum votes...and ya ill battle you another time...uppin this thread................................

come on uppni this battle.........2.............................voooo ooooootttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeee

uppni 3..................vote on this right here dont be bitches........................................... .................

cruel intentions:your opener was average, the flow was sort of fucked, and you flipped his name in the most obvious way possible. your punches real played, you should try being creative, cause gun and dick punches are just amature. your structure was good, you had some lines that were short on sylables, but overall it flowed pretty well. you had no metaphors or wordplay.....your closer was ayite, I don't know about anybody else, but I've heard that kanye west punch used in so many battles lately, that whe nI read em, they have no power. you need to just keep battling, youll get better everytime..

piss on da hataz: your opener was pretty good, I don't know whether you noticed or not, but your opener is also a norman bates metaphor, you know from the movie psycho...anyways your punches were played but they a little more thought out and they hit little harder than your opponents...you had no multiples, or wordplay..you had an accidental metaphor.......your closer hit so soft, even the flow was nice, you had no power.....keep it up..you got potential...

voteiss on da hataz
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now can come vote on my shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114089
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112366
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113218

aigth thats kool...1-0 lets get sum more votes...uppin numba 4.........................................

ill actually vote in a couple minutes when i have enogh posts, but piss on hataz had the better flow and all his lines actualy rhymed, but cruel had better punches and vocab.. so vote goes to cruel

ok last uppin...need some more voooooooooooooootes......... ............................. ....................... .................. ................

v/ cruelintentionz

betta punches and flow...pissondahaters dawg ya verse was hella wack sry

piss on hataz took it pretty easily...but good battle no hate.

i think piss on hatas got dis his flow was nice tha rhymes was pretty nice to he had sum good n sum bad punchlines but my votes goin ta him

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