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02-14-04, 05:07 PM
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IP: A560 AB42
lets not sleep please...i only drop an open mic
once in a long time...peace |
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02-14-04, 11:45 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
Good song,,,I really enjoyed this piece it had a lot of good detailed emotion with a good sence of power in your words...pretty concrete....i liked it...keep up the good work
I center my things now and then just to try and make my drops a little different...thats all
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02-15-04, 02:46 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: A560 AB42
uppin this
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02-15-04, 02:53 AM
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Suspended Suspense
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IP: EC0B 84C7
a very nice piece to be sure, enjoyable read, I would critique it, but it didn't seem to really have any problems. Maybe the use of slang in such a serious topic, a few more multi's wouldn't have gone un-appreciated. But overall very good drop. 8/10.
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02-15-04, 09:28 AM
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
Very Very dope here..I love the way you used your words sometimes......came off smooth and very nicely done. Beautiful flow, wonderful storytelling, and the Change was very dope...good shit
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02-15-04, 11:43 AM
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No Cure For MadNess...
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IP: 62F4 00A7
Pretty hot, Nice wordplay...Blah
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02-15-04, 10:09 PM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: A560 AB42
^damn u are wack...but thanx
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02-15-04, 11:40 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 1481 46A3
nice flow..i liked your word choice alot
you switched it up along with your flow good imagery i thought..nice concept you had here I liked how all ya love at tha begining.. turned to hatred...nice drop keep it up |
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02-16-04, 03:20 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: A560 AB42
uppin
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02-17-04, 12:20 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: A560 AB42
chae..uppin
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02-17-04, 02:55 PM
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Word.
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IP: 9058 C066
I agree this was a good piece.....I liked it, made a good read.....some things in this i could relate to.....sounds like something i would write lol, cause i write about this kind of stuff a lot....but yeah i liked it...had good flow to it i thought....the structure seemed good....had good imagary....overall a good piece here.
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