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Old 02-14-04, 03:52 PM   #1
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Hi my names is

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hi my name is jimmi//
im real tall n skinny//
n i think ur girls real pretty//
fuck tha nitty gritty i fucked er last night//
she got raped in tha alley at point knife//
slut enjoyed it for ten mins w/o puttin up a fight//
kinda like she like the concept of my dick not white//
but right or wrong i was forced inta tha situation//
i was all drunk jus in your town chillin on vaction//
when cykotic started buggin we need some penetration//
cops tried to grab me but i skipped out tha station//
now racin back to tha burgh baby mamas waitin//
bitch is all wack cuz i violated probation//
"it wasnt me that was jimmi again"
"shut tha fuck up fred dont doit again" {girl}
hi my name is fred//
im pissed n my face is red//
i got sick of my mom so i shotter in tha head//
my family tried to snitch n now thier all dead//
tha cop tried to grab me so i broke his fuckin neck//
my dad tried to stop me but he's........uh i forgett//
so i grabbed my bitch now were headin to quebec//
whole way there cryin bout all my sex//
"you said u loved me why u fuck that trick"{girl}
we ride for 2 days before im sick of tha bitch//
grab er by tha throat n give er neck a twitch//
grabber money dumper body now im fuckin sick//
cop pulls up"yo nigga ya wanna dime"{cop}
fuckin Undercover i see u all tha time//
hi my name is ryan//
'n i woulda bought that dime//
i stay blunted morning noon n night//
fuck tha hype its my psychotic medicin from killin my mom
thats why im in canada leavin tha burgh on tha run//
i cant get arrested im in this bitch to have some fun//
killin sprees is a hobby for the other nut//
im jus chillin not even chasin any but//
if a girl is inclined she can come suck my nut//
while i chill on tha couch smokin a blunt//
throw er ass out cuz tha trick knows too much//
cuz when i got sex n 'dro i talk a bunch//
grandma screemin "wanna go to lunch"{girl}
"i smell that shit ryan lemme hit that blunt"{girl}
fuck u cunt this is my lunch
hi my name is cykotic
n i fuckin hate this stuff

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Old 02-14-04, 03:56 PM   #2
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yikes
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Old 02-14-04, 04:22 PM   #3
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You, son, should be killed... NOW
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Old 02-14-04, 04:37 PM   #4
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i noticed theres a lot of haters in this web site talking bad when the material is really better than theres
keep it coming
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Old 02-14-04, 04:42 PM   #5
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^^^ are you serious gun did you even read that shit it was garbage listen dude you need to check the way you flow the shit had no type of rhythm, and the vocab was basic as can be overall this was garbage
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Old 02-14-04, 04:56 PM   #6
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i agree this wasnt very good.. no hate... jus speaking the truth... go read others drops.... get some sorta scheme going that flows good, and keep the syllables even... it goes better.... elevate
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Old 02-14-04, 06:49 PM   #7
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lol this was so bad...i was laughing the whole time it was that bad lol....but i agree with everyone else you need to elevate man....try writing about something else like a topic like maybe love, hate, or maybe tell a story through your raps...something you can relate to, its usually easier that way cause you feel it....but keep at it man.
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Old 02-14-04, 07:53 PM   #8
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hence>www.weakrymes.com
not tryin to impress anyone
not a nigga from brooklyn
white trash wigga from crook town
semi educated new to netspit game
thanks for tha imput, im still insane
peace niggas its valentines i got a date
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Old 02-14-04, 08:21 PM   #9
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hence>www.weakrymes.com
not tryin to impress anyone
not a nigga from brooklyn
white trash wigga from crook town
semi educated new to netspit game
thanks for tha imput, im still insane
peace niggas its valentines i got a date



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Old 02-14-04, 09:06 PM   #10
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nigger nigga wigga whack honkey chink jew
there all words used on BET's comic view
im far from racict and can relate to tha conotations
im not puttin out cds or spittin to tha nation
so ill spit how i talk with no discrimination
"the Nigger" family on tha chappelle show they were white//
im part of tha family their daughter was my uncles 2nd wife
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Old 02-14-04, 09:25 PM   #11
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um...anyways...your spit was kinda weak, starting with the flow it jumped from short bars to long and back down again, the vocab was way past typical so played out and it seemed like something someone mad mainstream would spit, i fuck chicks i fuck your sister i get pussy lalalalala...work on your shit man
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