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MaRvOlOuS~pLaYa | 0 | 0% | |
Ill Testament | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-14-04, 11:11 PM | #1 | |
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Ill Testament Vs. MaRvOlOuS~pLaYa
IP: B0AD 7156
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No Hate Dr Crew Feeding Biting Due Tomorrow Midnight Get In ASAP
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02-14-04, 11:14 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 6583 D925
tomorrow itz due so i aint gotta drop tonight?????
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02-14-04, 11:17 PM | #3 | |
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IP: B0AD 7156
No, Get It In ASAP Juss Start To Work On It, If You Finish Post, Feel Me?
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02-14-04, 11:18 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 6583 D925
iight ima start rite now iight playa
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02-14-04, 11:19 PM | #5 | |
Banned
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IP: 148B BB11
Yo Marcoious lets battle when your done with this ok
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02-14-04, 11:21 PM | #6 | |
Banned
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IP: 148B BB11
yo testament i want to battle you to what do u say are u up for it
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02-14-04, 11:45 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 6583 D925
iight son but get out of our battle son ill battle u when im done wit testament
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02-14-04, 11:51 PM | #8 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 6583 D925
iight yo ill herr i go
ayo herr i go dont even know how he can talk when i got my d*k in his mouth,come on ill testament wut kind of rap name is that// see me in the streets cause i got fatalities like mortal combat// i got a gat in one hand and a nine in the other, it aint even loaded and u cryin to your "mother"// lucky to see straight n lucky to walk, got him studdering like 50 tryin to talk// dogg come on i will, run ur pockets 2nite for my 8 bills// man mite as well call me mc hammer cause u "cant touch my game"// when im in the rappers hall of fame, this cat still at the top of the ranks in the rappers" hall of shame"// please u and rap dont go in the same sentance,i'll have u all day feelin so much repentance/ / cause n*ggaz get shot up for f*ckin wit me u dont belive /// wait till i c you you'll be lucky to breathe// haha naa''meeaaan playa
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02-14-04, 11:55 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 6583 D925
iight iuppin when your reaDY IIGHT NIGGA IM OUT SON PEACE
OUT 0N3
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02-15-04, 03:45 PM | #10 | |
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IP: B0AD 7156
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Layers= Hens That Lay Eggs IF You Wanna Win, Dont Accept My Callouts MPlayer.. Kickin' Your Ass, Now You Shittin Out Eggs Like Layers.. I'm Lyrically Abusin You, And Im Marvolous So I Have The Right.. N' U Lackin Talent, Even Twista Couldnt Make U A Celeb Overnight.. From The Hood? Dogg, I Know You Juss A Whiter Then A Wet Cast.. Lemme Fill You In, You Whack, Punches Miss, And This Is 1/2 Assed.. Lines 7-8 Can Take Care Of U Alone, This Is Juss A Waste Of Time.. Leaving You Silent, Couldnt Feel Me If You Were A Fucking Mime.. This Is Line Nine And Ten, I Spelled Them Out To Make It Longer.. Maybe You Should Chat With Britney Spears.. ......................................She'll Teach You How To Be Stronger! Weak, Enuff To Beat Him, Juss Vote Up, Drop Ya Links, I'll Hit Em' Up
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02-15-04, 03:52 PM | #11 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
aiight this battle was pretty even till that last line of ill testemants bout brittney spears.. that shit had me laughing.. marvilous came with a street verse..he had the kind of shit youd hear someon spitting in a live freestlye
you has some aiight lines like that one bout 50 tyring to talk however i felt like ill testemant edged you out with that last line.. the last line of ill testements verse took this battle in my opinion it was the best punchline of the verse vote- ill testement hit this battle up duke http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114270
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02-15-04, 04:20 PM | #12 | |
No Cure For MadNess...
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IP: 62F4 00A7
One sided,,
ILL Just Came Way Cleaner, Marv yer flow Was messep up by that wack ass structure, Work on yer structure make everything even..Marv u came w/ punches nothing really hard hitting tho..and your personals well most of them couldve been directed towards anybody, Ok wordplay....Elevate your punches,personals, n structure.... ILL- Nice structure was key to a good flow, Nice punches , nothing really stood out but you put way more creatiity into yer ish, U had more Humour and overall yer ish was just claner , Nice wordplay..... Again battle was pretty 1 sided... Keeep elevating, No hate V/ ILL testament
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02-15-04, 04:23 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 5F90 98D9
rite this battle was clear from the start 1st of i read marv's spit,
and i see alot of bullshit here your flow was wak man, as your strcuture was streched on places and also. your punches were wak you need them to stand out and they didnt, here atall man,not a bad try but elavate, ill....nice spit did what you had top do man...your strucutre was nice here, not explaining your lines werked here...punches were quite nice, and flow was ontrack nice spit v- ill, plz plz hit this up man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...741#post1186741 thx ............ |
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02-15-04, 04:51 PM | #14 | |
This Sites Best Vet
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IP: 6EB7 0673
this was a bit 1 sided ill testament took it wit ease............m playa u had stretched out lines played as hell and ur opener just didnt make sense.......ill u had a consistnent flow which was good ur punhces were alot harder...playa in this battle u tried but failed incredibly go visit wackness emergency centre 4 help and u will elevate gradually
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02-15-04, 05:18 PM | #15 | |
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: A7B4 62B6
onesided...
MaRvOlOuS~pLaYa ur verse was very week...punches didnt hit...structure was ok...no flow...personal there were non....wordplay was ok......overall:4/10 illtestiment...punches came hard....structure was basic...flow was nearly consitstent...wordplay was good...overall 7/10 v/illtesttimnet(beta by far)
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