Sixteen lines
Due tonight
Nothing sketchy
Peace.

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sounds good...i'll drop later on tonight.....usual rules, no feeding, hate votes etc...

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Truck me . . My bad, something just came up. Make it due tomorrow - I sound like an ass after insisting tonight . Sorry, dude.

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all to the good....no worries.......................

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you gonna drop?

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Kid promotes E-quality, but he's segregated from illness
like a cub scout with no merit badges.......
..............his verse was very plain and skill-less
See-bored for details, dictionary defn. summarize his verse
koala won't eat the eucalyptus I leave........
.............cuz I crammed my words down his throat first
We can go word for word, have a true duel of wits
then you can print my verse and wring it out................
....................so you can truly analyze my spit
your interested in Di version, to see what i can manage
no matter what Diverse > you..................
...............you'll never be at a rhyme vantage
He may appear to look like a girl in his avi
but he admitted that he sounds like an ass.......
...........take this marsupial outback, help his extinction fast
Of course we can see ya period.
it's probably the only time you flow with ease........
.........hit him so far below the belt it buckles both his knees
Used to be word perfect, now u formely known ever since
Kevin, Patrick, Alex, and John...............
..........the wackest one of all has his name in bolder Prince

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Normally, I'd be stumped for personals -
I'd scratch heads and smash guitars. .
But, dude did me the favour; in the form of an Ash Ketchum avatar
Pokemon master -
I've got a secret, & I'll share it with you, lame. .
Real writers don't respect losers who accept inherited crew names
That means you -
trust me, too: I don't mean to hate on feigned gays. . But,
Your girl says your crew name isn't your only abbreviated mainstay
A filler-full verse -
Trust, you shouldn't fret with friendly drawls. .
What's with the extra periods? Looks like Mom wouldn't accept menopause
When I'm finished, it's over -
You know that my level lights up men. .
& when I say, 'Die, verse!' I don't just want you to never write again
You could've had a chance at winning -
Say, suppose you had bottled wins. .
Would your structure still rival that of Rosie O'Donnell's chin(s)?
At every loss the youngeoun cries -
In fact, this trick held passioned riots. . But,
I haven't dropped so many 'pro'teins since I ditched the Atkins diet

I can end this shit uneven. HA!

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dope verse....lets get some votes.........................

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uppin this shit for votes.........................

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Nice verse from both
notables from Diverse were 'see my spit' and rhyme vantage...closer needed rewording

notables from Hod... the crew name punch..its true, sadly
both had nice drops, and since Diverse is in my crew il just keep this as even as i can

Good Job gents
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