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02-17-04, 10:18 AM | #1 | |||||||
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First try
IP: F8F4 4D1C
ok this is my first try...so keep that in mind...i have otha beats but they take so long to upload this is the only one so far on my page *shrugs* w/e
called: Ba Boom i realize there is a crap section at like 1:17 but ima work to fix that.... so leave feed an ill return the favor
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02-17-04, 10:39 AM | #2 | ||||
GONE... I QUIT
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IP: 0E29 4A51
ok ok... im the last person to be critiquesing people but.. it wasn't that bad, a little repetitive, but thats ok, a couple my beats are a lil repetitive.. like the guy sayin im the shit or wutever he was saying, so being it ur first beat, i give it a 7/10 for a first try www.soundclick.com/sdizzlerecords
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02-17-04, 01:40 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 8714 E16F
This is really good, especially for a first try. That pizzicato string sounds off-key at times, though.
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02-17-04, 03:37 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 0BB2 EA73
thnx a lot... yea a first try.... n e feed is worth havin
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Read My Shit & Gimme Respect
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02-17-04, 07:26 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 4115 5FC3
uppy up up
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CuZ Im PoEtIcAlLy UnStOpPaBlE
Read My Shit & Gimme Respect
I.J.L. Liberating All From Whack Ass Rhymes
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02-17-04, 07:28 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: ECA7 C399
imma check this out right now... brb
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02-17-04, 07:29 PM | #7 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: ECA7 C399
is that a tupac sample of him laughing?
anyways... the piano is gay. get rid of it or change the sound. the rest is pretty cool but it just sounds like 2 loops!!! not bad for first time but you should take out the piano.
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02-17-04, 08:57 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 631C DF1A
laughing? theres no laughing on the track an yea it does get a bit repetative...an the piano was in to kinda soften it i guess u could say
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CuZ Im PoEtIcAlLy UnStOpPaBlE
Read My Shit & Gimme Respect
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02-17-04, 09:53 PM | #9 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: ECA7 C399
is that pac though... a sample of him? it just sounds like a "ah-hah"
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