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02-13-04, 12:50 PM
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Battle Verse
IP: 4577 CD9A
Agaisnt a Kid Named BLuNTeD
well he really "Wants-It-Wit-Me-Bad" u cant "See His Complexion" like hes "Covered-in-Ski-Masks" but he couldnt "Blaze a Track" like "Blunted's-in-REHAB"!!// fans be "Lovin-These-Raps" so ill "Plant This Herb" like i "Shovel-the-Seeds-Back" cuz ill take "Blunt" like im "Runnin-wit-His-Weed-Stash"!!//1 then hell have his "Cabinets-Empty" then ill "Hit Blunted So Hard" ill be "Laughin-n-Giddy" but it'll knock him "Back-to-the-Sixtys"!!! Where "Blunt" was "Cracked-by-The-Hippies" // u "From Str8 Off Da Block"? u scared to "Rap-in-the-City" thats y u need "Practice-to-Rip-Me" to beat me? "Pull Something Outta Your Sleeve" but not even "Magic-could-Trick-Me"!!//2 ill have blunted saying Riz's "Raps-are-Sickening" he isnt "Mad-at-me-Is-He?" battle riz? "HUSTON we have a Problem" like hes "Hasseling-Whitney"!!// (Whitney Huston) ill be "Standin Tall" if a "Catastrophe-Hit-Me" battling riz is "No Good" liek a "Track-Team-Lifting" u wouldnt "GET ANOTHER SHOT" if u were "BATTLING-FIFTY"!!//3 (Shot 9 Times) "Blunts" in a cypher cuase im "Passin-Him-Quickly" ur "Text Wouldnt Get Big" If it was "Caps-from-the-Shift-Key" ull "BE-LEAVIN" this thread like "Broadcasts-on-Ripleys"!!// (Be Leaving-believing) ur punches couldnt "Manage-to-Hit-Me" cuz i got the "Heads Up" like i got "Giraffes-With-Me" but after i "Own You" ull "Be My Slave" like "African-History"!!// 4
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02-13-04, 01:02 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...156#post1181156 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...165#post1181165
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02-13-04, 05:13 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
up this please..what u think
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02-13-04, 06:26 PM
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IP: 6236 079F
feedbak??....like 303 peple on and not a reply all day
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02-13-04, 06:30 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
this was koo..i like the structure an some punches was ight...
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02-13-04, 06:40 PM
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IP: B9EC 25E6
what am i suppose to do its my first time
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02-14-04, 02:38 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
this site is cool and has mad people so please dont sleep
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02-17-04, 04:29 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
what he sed^^^^^^^^^...............................
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02-17-04, 04:31 PM
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IP: 1D70 8816
Punches sucked.
Lose all of the speech marks and hypens, because if you need them to single out the key segments of your punches, then it's clear your punches suck. Keep that in mind, bro.
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02-17-04, 08:13 PM
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IP: 5CB8 BDE0
some of this was confusing sum of the punches were played and made no sense it looks like you used similes but you more complex ones cuz sum of them were simple other than that it was alright and you need to battle this blunted kid
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