Spit and adjust, when Kids Want to Risk It In blood!!!..
Never Amidst with the Slugs, Stop! What She Needed Was Love..
Gasped a hold, Tweaked Syllables Till It Shined on Her Neck..
Reached Pinnacles, Always Remembered Never Denied Her Respect..
Each Time I Connect…A Mic Jack for a Night Cap or Cipher Session..
Seemed as If I might snap, on the Right Cat, She Calmed my Obsession..
Even Thru Light Resting, She Remains on my Mind Like Biker Tattoos..
Fought for Her Rights Wit Craft Too, When Politics Critized Like Taboo..
It was Past Due That I’d Dedicate My Life and Emotion..
With Writes of Devotion.......
She Helped! In Reflecting My Soul Like Nights on the Ocean..
I Ignite with a Notion…. That She Will ever Burn From Within..
It was H.E.R…Exposed as a Confidant Spurned From a Friend..
She Learned From The Trends, From Singles To Multi’s..
From Vocals. She Spun It off, to D.J’s Who Quote Lines..
I See days Where Those Guys….
Stand at Bodegas Revealing The Most Rawest for Of Her..
…. Now I Pause In My Verse....
Wipe a Tear As She’s Abused By Most, For Commercialized Profit..
Spoken of With No Regards These Artists Hurt Her Life With These Topics..
Of Guns and Chains, What Ever Happened to Songs Sung in Praise..
On Corners…. Break Dancers, Circles where She is calm and Safe..
RB…This Is Just Common Place…. Where I Stop in H.E.R Realm..
And Say Thank You To HIP HOP For Allowing Me to Conquer and Dwell…....

Peace
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This was pretty dope.............your vocab is very extensive i can tell......i like the topic which was good.........i think i have to say the best thing was the vocab though......its what kept me reading.........your imagery was pretty good as well.......an i like the way you ended it with

RB…This Is Just Common Place…. Where I Stop in H.E.R Realm..
And Say Thank You To HIP HOP For Allowing Me to Conquer and Dwell…....

Only problem i saw is that the flow was a bit stretched at times...but i liked, it was dope...hit my latest open mic up on my sig.....

aight cool...thanks

That was really nice how you remade Commons joint from back in the day shows that you have a respect for HIP HOP...Very nice peice maybe we collab one day

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