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Topical: Diverse Vs Rule
IP: 1B3B C284
Topic Inside My Mind
Verses Due: Tuesday Or Before Max Lines: 26 Good Luck Homie
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02-13-04, 08:53 AM
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IP: 1B3B C284
Normally people jump to conclusions about the delimas I face
Stereotyping every action as if I was reachin for a non-exsisting place Collaberating there peers into distinguish my present emotion Laughing out loud at me for no reason I feel the noise motion Through my skin my lungs feel light and my legs feel numb Respected issues are now focused on being relitivly dumb But I use to be those laughing crouds best friend last year All because of rumours they devoliping a lazy eye for tears Grade 9 was horrible people writting on my locker before class Another stormy day for Mike I assume is the for-cast If you could only read what's in my mind and understand facts You'd be surprised at the love I hold but you wont let hate relax Instead the flams are risen from the fire burning me inside Dead smiles now unknown this life I no longer lead can't survive Pushing me up the wall forcing me to apt to the hell on earth Caragious I once was but now I feel I died from a relationships birth All of these neglections need of aspectations to amune to lust Are dieng slow resembling animals in the jungle who do I trust? Everybody seems to think they know you but they don't realise The will you carry out day to day in hopes respect will soon survive Reaching for a reason to grip to so I can over come my scars You don't know me at all i'm the one reaching for the stars Don't interact with me at school yet you judge for you're blinde Exscape that ego you live in for you have no proof what is in my mind
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02-13-04, 11:06 AM
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Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
nice drop rule...i'm about to go to college but i will be keying up in a couple of hours....again, nice drop.
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02-18-04, 02:18 AM
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Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
Modeled after Utopian influence, free from all transgression
Escaping inside my mind as a method of higher ascension Rising above problematic situations, to a harmonius state Tranquility governs my destination, journeying to this place Offering quick retreat, refuge from this hectic planet Shelter from this storm, exactly how i had planned it My inner sanctuary, where thoughts are gathered and patterned Only to be released again, tossed to the wind and scattered On the surface, a hermit, serves as a formidable disguise No purpose or permit needed to escape behind these eyes Purely for release, heavy weight burdens my mental state But in my mind my spirit and body begin to collaborate Simultaneous movement, perfect unison is being achieved Self improvement that you'd have to see yourself to believe No longer my original, metamorphisis has finally occured Seeing every line distinctly, crossing over is no longer blurred Eyes focused to correct apature as distortions now eleviated Escaping to the place in my head that i've always anticipated
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