|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
02-19-04, 02:29 PM
|
#1
|
||||||
|
New to RB
|
Shadows Of The Apocalypse
IP: 8BF8 53CA
.. Chapter one, verse eight, in the book of Revelations .. Depicting mother earth being shook to its foundation As God looks on his creation .. as a failure before his eyes Dissapointed and appauled, the thoughts .. soar in his mind .. Of whether to end humanity .. To disgard his craft .. .. To erase all life on the planet and start from scratch .. .. Such a heartless act .. but take into consideration .. Everything that he's gave us .. And how we've repayed him. We've lied, cheated an stole .. are adulterous & dishonest .. Do you REALLY think that's ANYWHERE near what he'd of wanted? .. He promised long ago that .. in this event .. Four angels of the Apocalypse would begin their descent .. .. Down to earth .. turning our world into a battlefield .. .. Humanity's final hour .. as we cling tight to a shattered shield .. .. Until that cast is broken, with no signs of vast emotion .. .. It was predicted long ago, now that time is fast approaching .. . . . .. The Four Horsemen Are Among Us .. . . War . .. Horseman War began his course from the floors of heaven .. His cancerous form, taking storm of the war on terrorism Releasing its agressive rhythm, as war-scarred Baghdad fell .. Burnt flesh .. heavily decorated by shards of shrapnel .. The wounded left to die, as bystanders stood the sidelines .. Wide Eyed .. Watching the blood pour, & tryna fight cryin .. .. cold tears for the fallen, as the Horseman played Umpire .. .. to Bloodied Bullet-ridden Bodies; laid to rest from the gun fire .. Bare flesh .. torn from bone .. As the innocent fall .. The horseman's stake was claimed. Their victim's of War .. . . . Famine . "Help your fellow man" .. It's often neglected by parliment .. So the third world felt the wrath; as Famine struck at the heart of it .. Food sources were scarce, and the villagers starving .. As fierce floods destroyed the wheat they'd pillaged for harvest Hunger consumed the pupulace, beneath their hand-me-downs .. Hungry for answers as to why this .. had to happen now .. The Famine was God sent; a horseman of ruthless choice .. That let thousands starve to death for him to prove his point .. . . . Pestilence / Plague . .. Among this apocaliptic apex .. Plague played his part .. Leaving the world astounded with an outbreak of SARS .. No one was safe from harm; the disease increased its cause .. .. through the un-knowingly infected, eager to leave the shores .. And escape the sudden outbreak; consuming their city As an increasing death-toll has them doomed in self-pity The news reached a global audience; announced on TV .. Brought to the world's attention .. .. Plague had done what it set out to achieve .. . . . Death . Think back to nine eleven .. To the building the planes were flown To the second you watched the towers become a heap of paint & stone .. To when the first plane collided against the Tower's face & .. .. How the world watched; as it collapsed to its foundations .. Leaving nothing in its wake, but a bitter tasting surplus .. Among those that lived to see it .. .. Death has served his purpose .. .. . . .. Im a religious man, so it's important i stress this .. .. I strongly believe God's using these events as a message .. .. A predule of sorts .. Insight into our looming fate .. .. Of how the Apocalyptic Horsemen WILL consume our race .. .. If we dont start making a change; or an attempt at stopping this .. .. We'll all be men in black .. As Shadows Of The Apocalypse
__________________
<center>This angel's prowess, got me walkin in april showers tryna sum up the words that you just cant say with flowers Epidemospherium</center> |
||||||
 
|
|
|
02-19-04, 03:46 PM
|
#2
|
|||||||
|
Flyweight
|
IP: 9588 E886
Damn dawg that shit was ill. Not the kinda stuff I'd like really like to read cause it gets me thinkin. You see im a man of GOD im just not a saved man. But good post much props. The selection where the poem was about Death was my favorite part though. Good work
|
|||||||
|
|
|
|
02-20-04, 01:43 PM
|
#3
|
||||||
|
New to RB
|
IP: D9BE 0615
Thanks.
__________________
<center>This angel's prowess, got me walkin in april showers tryna sum up the words that you just cant say with flowers Epidemospherium</center> |
||||||
|
|
|
|
02-20-04, 10:57 PM
|
#4
|
||||
|
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
|
IP: 80EF 45DD
that was hot
one of the best i've ever seen id give u a 10/10 it flowed it had meaning and there was some vocab i think u should nominate urself 4 the best open mic |
||||
|
|
|
02-20-04, 10:58 PM
|
#5
|
||||
|
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
|
IP: 80EF 45DD
u should enter in the topical yourney u'd do really good
|
||||
|
|
|
02-21-04, 01:58 PM
|
#6
|
||||
|
Nigga Ima OG.
|
IP: 1C35 1BB2
finally some talent.. this was piece was amazing
The vocab,structure,flow.. it was all flawless... Legends.
__________________
OG Status My people skills are way better then yours, nigga.. |
||||
|
|
|
02-21-04, 01:59 PM
|
#7
|
||||
|
Nigga Ima OG.
|
IP: 1C35 1BB2
^blah, guess not... no Legends at this board.. but again
this piece was flawless.. 10/10
__________________
OG Status My people skills are way better then yours, nigga.. |
||||
|
|
|
02-21-04, 03:50 PM
|
#8
|
||||
|
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
|
IP: 80EF 45DD
go to the other rap battles and enter it in legends
|
||||
|
|
|
02-24-04, 08:51 AM
|
#9
|
|||||||
|
Banned: Spamming
|
IP: 6E7E BC73
^ I posted it at RB originally, it was slept on horribly.
Fuck their legends. :^)
__________________
W o r d P e r f e c t  ^This is your IP bitch! |
|||||||
|
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
