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02-24-04, 07:27 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Its My First Song on a Demo im Making, called Soulful Changes
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When i met ya , you was tied down and i knew it too//
Told her Eyes are the window to the soul, so she saw it too// not strong enough to sweep her off her feet, so ill just wait// thought about it long and hard, realized god makes it fate// i need to keep you close cant loose you whole// saw past your fosod, and fell for your soul// its a struggle to search for the ONE and keep a smile// confusin my heart to let you go, but im not allowed// things, they fell apart and became so different// and where we stand now is you i be-friendin// So i sit here releasing this pen to paper// bowin my head and thanking God that I met this stranger// i wonder aimlessly yes, im lost in the crowd// lost in her eyes but shes no where to be found// she speaks i get breathless, and start feeling flush// when its not meant to be, thats why they call it a crush// _________________________________________________ Chorus:: its the patients that keeps me going strong its the battle of truth overcoming the wrong its the shadows of darkness killed by light its the feeling with you that feels so right together well walk with hand in hand its this union of woman and man its just a mere matter of what is ment to be i was half alive before, cuz now you complete me __________________________________________________ ___ Excuse me miss yes i already know your name// dont dispear gurl, i aint into playin no games// but you got me feelin like im back in school// got me thinkin about playing phone tag with you// so when i rise up and the burdden is lifted// when i settle down with you then ill know that im gifted// two hearts searching for the right kinda things// ill make it an eternity, and not a one night kinda thing// when you say your tired, i just wanna hold you head// where they said they loved you, i'll show you instead// when you need a friend, i can tame the lover in me// cuz now-a-days, lovers equal insensitivity// Now im sure that ill show my imperfections// but everyday i have you, i count as my blessin// i wanna keep you happy, cuz thats the way you make me feel// First verse was a thought, this is how i know its real// ::CHORUS:: confusious say that patients, it is a virtue// if i had to wait, it take two lifes to serve you// but im gonna do my best to make you feel the same// its a kinda magic, how i keep burning this flame// i believe in love at first sight and in divine passion// thats why your my foutine of youth the reason i keep out lastin// in all honesty i fell like i said more for your soul// but the whole package of you broke the mold// i get threw my days just to hold you close// every night on bended knee, i thank my heavenly host// cannot let you go even when destiany strikes// on my darkest days, you still give me light// whatever happens guess its part of gods' plan// im survived to know that you were graced with gods hands// when its all said and done, my soul id give// exhale my lastbreath with your face inside my eye's lids// ::chours OUT::
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MATCH.........GOT U Vote @ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114041 you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot// if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot// what is you confused cant member which team you be with// i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen// |
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02-24-04, 09:06 PM | #2 | |||||||
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leave some feedback Please
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MATCH.........GOT U Vote @ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114041 you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot// if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot// what is you confused cant member which team you be with// i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen// |
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02-25-04, 05:44 PM | #3 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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thats an ok post
work on ur vocab keep droppin |
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02-25-04, 07:30 PM | #4 | ||||
Suspended: Cheating
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dat was tight
i like those syllables |
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02-26-04, 06:21 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 0612 539A
thanks guys keep them comin
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MATCH.........GOT U Vote @ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114041 you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot// if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot// what is you confused cant member which team you be with// i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen// |
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03-01-04, 06:47 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 0612 539A
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MATCH.........GOT U Vote @ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114041 you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot// if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot// what is you confused cant member which team you be with// i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen// |
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