15 line max
no ridin
due by 10

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you softer than ja you faker than 50/
if i gave you a week to write you still couldnt beat me/
ill cut you with a razor blade infected with by aids/
so you can win a battle by sympathy or aid/
you like the bengals you used to losing/
you soft bit*h a feathered pillow would give you a bruising/
i hit you with lyrical daggers now your bloods oozing/
you one of those sensitive thugs you just need a hug/
you 36 in your moms basement quit being a scrub/
get off lyrics.com get a lyric yourself/
i read some of your last battles you need help yourself/
you better off getting ryhmes from blue's clue's himself/
i said 15 bars i meant only one/
all i gotta say is,fu*k you son.

waitin on your verse what up !!!!!!!!you only got about 45 min.

that was one gay ass verse u suck homie
i hope ur opponets better than that

who the hell are you,homie.oh you must be one of those aint real niggas.you one of those niggas who dont rhyme and write shit on here that you dont say in an regular conversation whose words dont even go with what u saying niggas.then how about you show me how its done as you say" HOMIE"

Come On This Was Due Last Night You Needed Extra Time

My Bad....forgot about this shit.....but check it................

If anything, I'm everywhere-since what i type echoes online through text post/
to find your neck's throat-and strike your deathblow..../
Your next quote? just like mine, minus "Yeah...""Dope...." and line with "Eh..." "Nope..."/
Because the way i "drop cats" like you is "animal abuse"../
You can't see me or touch me; the intangible recluse/
With phantom fans from crews like I.R.S-that remain anonymous/
It's common sense, The Toilet knows to move when I'm "dropping sh*t"/
The consequence? Get caught in it...and thats when your rep stops/
Trapping Jay Jordan in this text box to hold him captive on my desktop/
Less props? I'm already "slept on" like bed cots/
so beef...? I'm hopping right in "the Center" like "epcot"/
Are you done sucking?-Should i run and summon the next cock?,Head bobbing "YES"/
Take off your dress and spread your fresh thingy-to show everyone in the Shrine your wet SPOT/
After all..."YOU defeating ME?" how can even priest have faith in it,/
This verse is a courtesy-I mean, I could leave this blank and win/
A false faggot with pegan friends if "battleing me" aint a sin...what is? I'm guessin nothing/
If you're sttressed or something-and want to get it off your chest, then get breast reduction/
"Jordan" a woman? ah ha ha,
ah ah AH-I'm cummin....*mwa*
How does it feel to get run up in?/
And its funny that ya thought ya, actually had a chance, Now ya Cryin shittin in ya pants, Just be glad ya had tha chance ta battle someone with skills highley advanced/

may the voting began

toon nice drop u got nice flow and vocab u need to work on personals though
jj ok punches u need to work on vocab personals and flow only herbs use the same word to make shit rhyme
toon won this hands down

JJ just didnt bring the heat needed to win. Toon your structure is lacking but your content, multis, punches were on point.

vote toon

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jj bit that verse.... get off lyrics.com get a lyric yourself/
i read some of your last battles you need help yourself hahahahaha and this fag tried to critique my battle hahahaha

report that shit to a mod................uppin anyway..............

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