song was coo....flow was kinda off at times but only for a second though....hook was hmmmm....never mind....lyriks were there but I would feel more of it if you would emphasis your words and put your emotions into it instead of soundin like you readin from the paper...nah mean? but yea, keep doin wat you doin and you'll elevate more....shit, I'm still elevatin....I'm far from my peak.....but yo,could you peep my shit on here "Eliminated Easily" and give me your feedback? I'd appreciate it...holla!

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