IP: 31C1 CDF2


liquor of tears,you stick dick up queers rears. bum cheek cum smear, young son dont sneer/ you that bitch down the beach who wont jump from the pier. this punk gets drunk from one beer,then tink he look a hunk in his l,a gear/ im sorry son but im being sincere, when i say youve no idea,how easily i could end your career/ i equal fear round my area, tyne nd wear. all u equal to"s a mear fucking ryhme then see ya/
i dont give a fuck bout you, like my rent arreas. that why im not gonna bother with round 2 ive went to ikea/
cheers.........!
well pretty basic and very played out gay jokes you need help on elevating but slowly you'll get there this is jus for fun
work on everything and try to be more original in your verse
no hate jus helping out a mc



Liquidation of your mind, Only takes a matter of time 1
Before my words stain ya face like iodine 2
Your words so short, I jump'em like hedges. 3
Meet ya face ta face,bullets split ya chest like wedges 4
The Sensation of this confrontation is leaving you facing the fact -
that the only time you beat somethings during masturbation. 5

Now back the hell up, and learn to rhyme without the cuss
And pack ya piece, cause preparation is a must
I rhyme better sleepin then you ever could.
Damn, Even if ya name was Camble you couldn't be Mmm Mmm Good

well much betta verse all in all
you had a better structure but drop the numbers and you also had a betta flow
your pounches were a bit weak but managed to knock him out


you get my vote

jus being honest
check back for honest voting in my battle in my sig

peace

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Thanks for the honesty... And i know im weak for now been outa the game for a while. I beleive the rules were first to 3 and i think im there already. So Good match riff.. Better luck next time ?... Close it up and count one for me

ahh, n/m bout that I forgot need 5 votes... Well get some more votes up in here

yo riff sorry bro im gonna have to give this one to Liquor tho...
i just wasnt feelin it sorry man... but it was funny like casualty said.... just keep workin at it....

My vote goes to ----> Liquor <---- it was pretty good but i know you could do better bro..... but you won this one good job....

This battle is ok......ummm.........wasn't to much skill, but it was funny.........riff raff....your verse did make me chuckle a lil.....but I think that you overused multies in your intro, which caused your verse to choppy........and you could have put stronger punches in there also.........verse=4.5/10

LOT, I don't think that your multies were strong enough. Though you had some, they didn't make an impact on your verse(if that makes sense). YOu also put punches in there, but they wasn't all that stronger either......but the upside to this is that your verse had better flow.......verse=4/10

P.S. Don't sleep............................

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115329

Liquor of Tears

the man of the hour
i thought the numbering was different and i like it
besides for that you simply killed him

Riff Raff

you started of well, but in the end verse, you lost it
i think u needed one good punch, but it never came, good luck maybe next time

iight, yo can you vote on the poll so we can close this? Thanks man Good battle riff.

ha ha ha u only winning coz peeps who dont like me voted for you

fair enough mine was all one wurd but u never droped 1 personal
took a full day to write,,,,,,look,,,,
any real mc will know who the real winner is..... ask white flame & toon

Lol.. I had to idea when you were going to drop yours, and it didnt take me a day. It took eme like 5-10 minutes to type it. And you can go ask white flame for all i care hes got no skill at all. I could care less what TOoN thinks. So quit ya complaining and face the loss.