aiight....
10 lines max
no crew
no dick rydin
aaaaaiiggghhttt!!!!

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talkin giberish ima rip u up wid verbs sweet like lickerish,
damm correct you tlk "giberish" coz you couldn't drop a diss,
if you pre-wrote a punch you would still miss,
but like 10 pin bowling ur ready too fall,
ur claming of the doll like ur name gutter ball,
like huston to earth lyricals rhymes are out of this universe,
ive now av the embressment of beatin tlkin' giberish first,
but my lyrics obtained through hard work and strain,
on a finely tuned brain, but ive beat giberish like da kane,
left giberish cold blooded and ship recked,
wid verbs no emcee can reflet..

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lyrical mc ur jus not in the rite key,
got a be smooth and glide like a bee,
u think u got style but u could only get laid,
if he dug a a prostitutes grave,
she'd b moledy as shit missing a tit,
but look at the money you'd saved,
u think im gunna fall
but ill stand tall, and stand on u like shit,
every verse i hear u spittin man the pictures gettin clearer,
there is a chat room im hitten,
this aint chat this is battle rap,
so ya better stop talkin crap!

yo, this was a weak battle

lyrical mc..you had a quite a aaight flow and your structure was definetly there. You had some aiight punches and some personals but again they didnt hit very hard. They was no wordplay.

talkin gibberish...you didnt really have much of a flow and your structure wasnt really there. You didnt have hard hittin punches or personals and you also didnt have any wordplay..

you both need to evaluate

vote lyrical mc

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Do You Want This? Its Death And Now Theres No Suicicde - Genie

good battle ya, its was close but i think lyrical mc took this one, i was feelin his flow. talkin giberish ya lines were good man, keep up the gd work

vote: lyrical mc

vote on my battle plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115505

please drop a vote on dis battle....uppin #1!!!!!!

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talkin giberish ima rip u up wid verbs sweet like lickerish,
damm correct you tlk "giberish" coz you couldn't drop a diss,
if you pre-wrote a punch you would still miss,
but like 10 pin bowling ur ready too fall,
ur claming of the doll like ur name gutter ball,
like huston to earth lyricals rhymes are out of this universe,
ive now av the embressment of beatin tlkin' giberish first,
but my lyrics obtained through hard work and strain,
on a finely tuned brain, but ive beat giberish like da kane,
left giberish cold blooded and ship recked,
wid verbs no emcee can reflet..

this verse had alot of werdplay meta and alot of pounches and personals which came strong aganist Gibberish but one werd of advice next time don't use the other dudes name so many times


lyrical mc ur jus not in the rite key,
got a be smooth and glide like a bee,
u think u got style but u could only get laid,
if he dug a a prostitutes grave,
she'd b moledy as shit missing a tit,
but look at the money you'd saved,
u think im gunna fall
but ill stand tall, and stand on u like shit,
every verse i hear u spittin man the pictures gettin clearer,
there is a chat room im hitten,
this aint chat this is battle rap,
so ya better stop talkin crap!

very week you need to elevate and get more pouches in ya game


vote: Lyrical

vote on my two battles in sig return the time

peace

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Vote: Lyrical MC

ALthough dont stretch your lines dude, like dont ryhme words every 3 sentences it throws your shit off track.

Anyway you won this in every categorie basically.

Can the both of you please hit this up honestly, thanks.

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...702#post1198702