posted by riff raff

look i aint bitching....... but u did practice your shit all last night
mine was srtaight off the top of me dome
but, u know what they say.. u win sum u loose sum

congrats......

actualy wen you didn't check in yesterday i though you were a no show
so i didn't even bother typing a verse
wen i saw you did drop i whipped sumthing in like 15min cuz i had other stuff to do

well keep ya head up with practice you'll get there
upin 2

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look, one six eight, your shits long late. youve added another day to our arranged date, nd still aint created a debate about who"s more lightweight/ im gonna be straight, i couldnt wait any longer for you to recriminate. so im gonna bring back up the all shit ive ate, then serve it to you on a dinner plate/ i hate it when fakes think they great. u made a big mistake, tempting fate/ im bout to anialate, this five stone in weight dying state. the lyrics im supplying contain non stop irate/

No bar structure... Not too good overall... It's alright
3/10

168 rippin this riff rafft..Down a river still no flow
I read your last battles and thought you would be a no show
Your last few battles damn they really were sumthing
You could've been betta off reading nuthing
You lack the skill you say you hold
Half your shit is lame jus tell us from which Rap baord it was stoled
Campared to your battles my structure is a A+
Rap Genius in the making?...it hasn't even been jus (justified)
You also killed the the english language home bitch
How can you "drugs drink sex" you got everyone's head itch
well 10-15 lines was said to be but i could end it with jus say blah
lol.....is it worth it?....shit i'll go for a few more by jus saying nah nah(lmao)
fuck it jus stay in your castle and don't come out until your skill is betta
I ripped through this wholr verse pounching you with personals a win 4 u....neva


A little more structure and better punches... Still need to work though
3.5/10

Vote- 168

168 won because da first was just super weak...
168 4/10
riff N/A

upin for the third time

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