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03-04-04, 08:57 PM
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New to RB
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Look Here Tell me What You Think
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Yo, Everyone...Tell me what you think of this freestyle
Yo, time to enter class son... Im tha teacher in this class, I got a degree in pain When your rippin on the boards your under my regin They call me Casper cause im white This is true but at least i can put up a fight. Been rollin with the best rappers in town/ 5 of the hardest throwing 'em down. I haven't been challenged by anyone yet/ If winning battles were wars I be a Vietnam vet Poppin a nine like i be poppin a rhyme. I make other rappers spit thru wires like Kayne I'll be like Frank Sinatra and do it my way! Reppin the East Coast and dissin the west Ya wanna roll son your messin with the best! So thats it end of the fu*king story I'll be going out in a blaze of glory Respond tell me how you think it is |
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03-07-04, 11:45 PM
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IP: 522A 016B
This was ok....it wasnt that good but it was ok....could have used some multies in it to make it more complex, it was mostly one syllabal rhyming words but i guess for a freestyle or keystyle in this case it was alright...keep at it.
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03-07-04, 11:50 PM
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IP: B53A 1E53
it was ok .....i like some of it but it was too simple .....keep doing ur thing tho man just expand ur vocab
peep mine too and tell me wut u think
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