iT'S STILL 2-0 THATS IS NOT A GOOD VOTE UPPIN FOR VOTES

Godfather....your verse was koo...............you had an ok flow.......I wasn't feelin the long bar structure..........but you worked your style nicely



^^^nice word play..........

but then your verse got weak in some parts like this



^^^^that pillow joint is to elementary for your skillz..................but overall I think that you have a complex stylr and this is one of the better verses that I read......but try not to be so wordy in your verse aight..........try to work on makin it flow better........6/10

JB..............your verse was more concise...........but it flowed well..........I like the opener............



that was pretty dope...................I like the way you kept though flow going like that....and kept the punch like strong at the end.........but after that your verse got kinda weak........I've seen you come harder than that...........I was feelin your flow....but you rhymes got predictable after the opener...........5.5/10

uppin for votes please

yo i dont even know who the hel you are. i never take rhymes from ppl. especially wack ones like u. uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ..........................................

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