who i is young baker man.....
shake off the haters man....
pad in my right and a pen in my otha hand.....
im a rapper man.....always rapping man.....
done it on da mic stand.....now im da hype man....

talkin bout da best my name betta come out man......ask all these niggaz around they kno wat im about man.....2 good dat y im a genuis man.....words is crazy like u neva beliving man.....play my part when it comes 2 my rapping stand....move all around da nicest nigga out man....got my dresscode wit matching hats and rubberbands.....same color durag da hottest nigga in da fucking land....niggaz get tripped up if they ever fuckin ran....make them niggaz under judgement like the fucking band.....mannnn.....and....im 2 good 4 words and....y the name baker?gaven by my grams man.....n-e problems jus hit me on my cell man.....ill be da 4 my homies even my friends mann...anddd....im on top man...pockets on cops man....dickriding i aient even dropped man....neva stopped man....mes wit baker u get yo wig rocked man...

I feel it, hear it in my head. Nice flow, odd, fun. Nothing that'd go platinum though (no offense intended). I don't know how much you care 'bout things like tenses, but the tripped up if they ever ran line I had to read twice. Should've been got tripped. Got and ran, get and run.

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Give away the stone. Let the oceans take and transmutate this cold and fated anchor.

Give away the stone. Let the waters kiss and transmutate these leaden grudges into gold.