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crzywhtekid91588 0 0%
will a peer 5 100.00%
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Old 03-17-04, 10:08 PM   #1
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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will a peer vs crzywhtekid91588

IP: 525D FF37

u drop first
 
Old 03-17-04, 10:41 PM   #2
crzywhtekid91588
New to RB
 
IP: 72E8 5D0B

yo dis is the realest wigga i be pullin a trigga yeah dats right and you and ugly ass bitch who is white you ruin the race and next time you go against me im gonna fuck up yo face so watch out and this is my shout
 
Old 03-17-04, 11:32 PM   #3
FairInHeight
Everyone... I'm Gay!
 
From: T.O.
IP: 25BD 09A7

you SUCK, i already said enough to you when you tried to diss that kid who was saying he was crazy, so go read what i had to say there.
 
Old 03-18-04, 12:58 AM   #4
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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when i saw this i wasnt gonna post now im bout 2 slit ur throat
an easy win 4 most im 2 good 4 u so when i win aint gonna boast
i never would have battled u if i knew u were this whack
dont have to really attack i easily put ur head on a plauqe
ur structures so whack i dont know how many lines u spit
u should have quit b4 i spit uve been defeated now admit

thta took me like 5 min but its good enough so vote and ill vote on ur shit
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Old 03-18-04, 01:29 AM   #5
YoungStar*
Youngin jus call me Young
 
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From: that Austin Tex 512 reppin Kileen to tha fullest
IP: 4948 3CF8

um wow...ur rite will cuz um hiz shit wuz whack...he didn't come wit good structure or vocab or ANY PUNCHES OR METAZ OR anything..yo bro go work on ur flo(tha kinda weak shit he came wit)...lol...um will won ezly she wuzn't even trying cuz her stuff wuz betta than hiz and he kno it
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Old 03-18-04, 04:01 AM   #6
SUPERVILLAIN
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From: Sindicate City, U.S.A.
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jesus christ almighty!!! thats a fuckin battle???

no offense crzywhtekid91588, im not trying to hate on you.......but you got outgunned cutty. practice a little bit more in open mic to help you develop a style/structure before you jump headfirst into lyrical warfare. keep trying my friend and never accept defeat. thrive for greatness.

will........you know you peeled him back on this one. you didnt even have to try. all i gotta say is "shame on you" if you knew this cat would come out with some shit like that. ha ha ha, your a cruel bastard for that one. holla at ya boy!!! one.

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Old 03-18-04, 08:38 AM   #7
SPuL™
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From: Bolton, MA
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Yea, Will won this one easily. There was no structure by the first dude, and it had no punchlines and shit like that. Good rhyming by him, but you need more punches. My votes for Will.
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Old 03-18-04, 10:02 AM   #8
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: 275E DC37

breakdown for will a peer:

flow:striaght nothing amzing but good 7/10

volcab:alright nothing great again just not much to talk about 7/10

punches: everyline addressed your oppenent great! nothing that really hurt but the fact that you were swinging from start to finish and had a couple of great personal gives you points here 7/10

overall:21/30 solid verse, good mechanics and alright personals

breakdown for crzywhtekid:

flow:nothing no hate you suck 1/10

volcab: where?????? reallly no hate just don't battle if your not gonna try and write something 1/10

punches: .........???????!!!!!!! 0/10

overall:2/30 worst battle verse i've read on this board

vote--will a peer easily took this
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Old 03-18-04, 03:18 PM   #9
crzywhtekid91588
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nah dawg look at your fuckin shit you dont know who you messin wit i aint good when i go first and go drink a sprite to quinch your thrist just stop there i really just dont care you cant rap and everything you do rap its just fuckin crap blah blah blah thats all you be sayin after im done you will be prayin and if you think you can math this then give me a holla bak at this shit
 
Old 03-18-04, 03:33 PM   #10
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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ur stupid face it u cat rap
practice b4 u go challengin other ppl
if u told me u sucked i wouldnt have battled u lol
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Old 03-18-04, 03:36 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally Posted by crzywhtekid91588
nah dawg look at your fuckin shit you dont know who you messin wit i aint good when i go first and go drink a sprite to quinch your thrist just stop there i really just dont care you cant rap and everything you do rap its just fuckin crap blah blah blah thats all you be sayin after im done you will be prayin and if you think you can math this then give me a holla bak at this shit



nah dawg look at your fuckin shit <=== Nah DAWG' look at your FUCKIN (SHIT)-pure shit (lol) boi you're fuckin lame

Check it:

listen up boy i know the key to success/
u wana step to me well then be my fuckin guest/
u aint goin impress me with all ur bullshit calls/
you've been overthrown, you were the leader as i recall/
this is wat happens when u got a loose lip/
people try to bring ya down with ya crown u lost ur grip/
u werent well equipped, bitch ur such a bore/
from the shit you talk, i thought there was more in store/
cant u see disasterpeice420 made u pipe down, faggot ass clown/
ur luster's been lost ur going straight down the drain now/
dont put that shit on me, boy ill take ur scalp/
u in a hairy situation do u know wat i'm about?/
its all about the finest ni66az, cash, freestyle and spittin'/
while u come out the closet, dressed in drag admittin/
that u fuckin gay, thats why all ur friends are bitches/
even if u had a chance u couldnt leave their pussies needin stitches/
dick size of a pin, balls empty with no sperm/
get rid of them fringes homo, go get urself a perm/
this is the new firm, now "DISASTERPEICE420" runs this muthafucka/
while crzywhtekid91588 retreats and ducks and runs for cover/
bro you aint asian, u as asian as caucasian/
couldnt get on fire, even if you were blazin/
i gotta go, my next blunt is already rolled/
puff puff give to DirtBoi69, yo man this bitch needs to be told/
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